I love Jason and Reyna. I hope you write more for them.

I was always a Jiper is endgame kind of fan, but I've always felt bad for Reyna. I think she and Jason should have dated, then had a falling out or something where they just realized it didn't work, and decided they worked better as friends. That's just my opinion though, and there's nothing I can do about it now. Why am I posting this?

Jasper! Jasper!

reyna, he must be with reyna

Yeah, I happen to like Jeyna better too, though I have nothing against Piper, I don't know, I just like her more with Leo, weird, I know...

i think you story is interesting but i kinda want it to be jason-piper but,make reyna find some good man too .

This is just my thought so no flames please ! This is a good story but I want the couple in the story is Piper and Jason not Liper or Jeyna. And my 6 year old sister are reading your story , no kiding she 's huge fan of your but i think your story kind of have lot of bad word in it so... , Anyway , your story is good and i luv it , Keep up the good work !

Okay, so... I'm not really sure about this. First, I just want you to know that this is not a flame. Just my personal thoughts.
So, this is all Jason's fault, but everyone decides to ignore that and side with Jason just because they like Reyna more than Piper? That's a little unfair, don't you think? Jason was being an ass and decides to go mess with Piper's heart more than he already has, then when his 'girlfriend' see's, he blames it all on her? Then Clara decides to scold her for ruining Jason and Reyna's relationship, where they were 'truly in love'. I don't like that much, because if Jason was REALLY in love with Reyna, he wouldn't have been that affectionate with Piper in a way that made Reyna think that they were flirting or he was cheating or whatever.
Then Reyna just forgave him? That didn't make much sense to me. I mean, even if we had no idea what Reyna's personality was from the books, like, 99.9% of girls out there in the world wouldn't forgive a guy for breaking their heart that easily.
But these are just my thoughts. I mean, if they offend you, I beg your pardon in the most polite of ways and please disregard them.

Okay, so, I get that Jason hadn't told Piper about Reyna yet, but why is he trying to avoid her? I mean, I know you said that Piper was, like, hoarding him, but why is she being so clingy? Why is she being so clingy that Jason has to hide from her? If he's not hiding from her because of that, then he's just being a wuss who doesn't want to deal with his problems. This isn't a flame. I'm just confused, is all.

wtf it waz always jason and piper

oh shitsu...

good story and i want the couples to be jason and piper.

Okay. Either put in an occasional curse word when it's damned well needed or change the rating to K! Have you BEEN to a PG-13 movie recently? No? I didn't think so. Well let me tell you: they have sex, they drink, and they curse. In the Percy Jackson movie(which was PG)it zoomed in on his mom getting groped! I'm sorry, but I loathe it when people put the wrong rating on a story! There's a system for a reason! The main reason for a story being T is CURSING and when someone is genuinely that pissed off(or in Reyna's case scared), then I don't know about you, but in my opinion they are definitely allowed to say fuck!

I'm so confuse

:P aww, reading these made me feel all fuzzy :)

I'm really sad to see the fanfiction i have been with since when I came here end. One of the very first I became attached too. But, as you say, let go and accept new.

I remember the one I wrote in april, it makes me feel pretty nostalgic, time flies! :')

I hope you write a new story soon, because you are definitely gifted :')