Are you going to continue this? I would love to read more.

Why you no finish it?

It was real good! And you had a good plot to work with.

Please continue it

good chappy!

I liked the revelation of their past and I somehow have the feeling Shunsui and Juushiro come into this now :) Shunsui being her father and Juu being lover (or the way around xD)

you should include Renji more :D I can't get enough of him

I love this story so far too

although I wish you would bring more of renji :D he is just my favourite xD

nice story und chap!

I like the interaction between ichi und keena
but I wonder how she and renji are related...
bring in the future more of renji :D

Very sexy and I can't wait to read more. Whose sister is she, though?

Well, I'm certainly interested in it! Your O/C sounds hot and well...Ichigo is CERTAINLY so;) Can't wait to read more so please don't end it!