ehehhe love how he turned her bumblings back on her :p cuteness!

Awww cute story :)

c'est une des premières histoires que j'ai lues quand j'ai découvert ce site ! je ne savais pas comment laisser une critique maintenant que je sais, je voulais vous dire combien j'ai aimé cette histoire,le fait que Becker sache son histoire, le remake de l'épisode 2 de la saison 4, et le joli coliier qu'il lui offre !

c'est une jolie histoire !

Awz!

That necklace sounded perfect for Jess and I loved how Becker remembered despite the day they had. His teasing is so adorable as are her comebacks- I just love their banter! :D

Husbands, boyfriends or girlfriends :D I can see the scene from Primeval right in front of me and this is as much good as it was in the show.

Thank you! You've put a smile on my face it was a really good story.

Btw this is the part that made me smile loads.

Becker looked at her seriously. "Don't worry, I didn't read any of the personal bits," he said. "You know, like about husbands or boyfriends... or girlfriends." He gave her a wide-eyed innocent look as his voice took on a teasing edge. "But I guess it would be a boyfriend you had if you had any of those–"

"Oh, go and do your paperwork!" Jess exclaimed, flinging herself back into her chair and turning away from him. Becker started laughing and Jess shook her head, unable to stop herself from grinning along with him.

Aww, so realistic and sweet with the necklace. Plus, I loved the inclusion of the "boyfriends, or girlfriends..." thing. :)

Awwww! Totally loved this! *grins from ear to ear*

I've read a few Becker/Jess stories lately, and this definitely goes to my top 5 list. So lovely! And so them. ;)

This was so sweet and enjoyable. The characterizations were spot on. I loved how Becker teased Jess in the end. :)

awww, cute cute cute! love it loads!

Rx

awwwwww... this is so something I could see happening esp. after epi 6... I think that situation with the bomb and the hug was their way of giving us some sort of major hint with Jess and Becker without actually having them be together... i was so mad that they didn't have any jess/becker stuff in episode 7 tho i assume that they did that because it leaves any possibilities they want for them open for next series (like making them end up together or something) you know?

*squeals and bounces* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! *squeals again* damn it Becker! why do you have to be so perfect?

I loved the end bit with the boyfriends...or girlfriends. :D

Anything you write makes me like Jecker a bit more :)

So, so much love for this! Really loved the throw back about reading files. Great, lovely piece.