Huh... 'special'...
/gasp
Is Canada on drugs?

Please do write the ending. It's a shame you don't want to continue, but I suppose it's your choice.

wait, this is the 10th doctor, right?

Hey, I was wondering, in any of their searches, can the doctor happen to meet a past incarnation like when they find China(in Marco Polo), or Britain(in The Web of Fear, The Invasion, any 3rd doctor story, Robot, Battlefield, Aliens in London/World War III, any of the 10th doctor's christmas specials, The Shakespearean Code, etc.)?

emmm... that translation... 'lo que estaba mal con mi sombrero'... it's '¿qué está mal con mi sombrero?'... and there are... emmm.. more translations... that are wrong...

The french you used is horrible. Did you use google translate ?
As a french person a will help you correct your mistakes:

You wound me Vous m'avez bléssé.
I care about you Je me soucie de toi.
you seem to prefer the hard way Tu semble préférer faire ça à la dure.
Sorry, sorry France, make it stop, it hurts, sorry, sorry Désolé, désolé France, fait que ça s'arrête, ça fait mal, désolé, désolé.
Do you remember our little pact? I had to start somewhere, did I not? Tu te r'appelle de notre petit pacte ? J'ai du commencer quelque part, n'ai-ce pas ?
What pact ? Quel pacte ?
Mind your language, my dear! Don't you remember? Fait attention à ce que tu dis, mon cher. Tu ne t'en souviens pas ?
Leave! Partez ! (or if you wanted to say leave me alone you can say " laisse moi")
Wait! I…have a present for you Attend! J'ai…un cadeau pour toi.
A rabbit? Why would you give me one of those? Un lapin? Pourquoi voudrez-tu m'en donner?
To say sorry. I should have seen what was coming. I…I should have stopped it Pour (te) dire désolé. J'aurais du savoir ce qu'il allais arriver. Je... j'aurais du l'arrêter.
But you didn't mais vous ne l'avez pas fait / Mais tu ne l'as pas fait.

Please, next time you use a foreign language you don't know, either restrain from using it or try and make an effort in the sentences, if you don't want to be seen as an idiot. Because it is really offending for native of the language !

Love this story! But you made a little mistake with the spanish Jaja!Te mueves como una tortuga, mejor guarde sus ingenios sobre usted antes de que su cabeza es la mía! You wanted it to say "before your head is mine" but there it says " before youre head is my head" to say " before youre head is mine" you should put it like this "antes de que tu cabeza sea mía!" Little mistake but i wanted to point it out. Sorry for the bad english.

This story has quite captured me (Fail *Facedesk*) Anyway, I like how you have other people write it with you :D

Update soon!

I LOVE DOCTOR WHO AND I LOVE HETALIA!
Keep making more chapters please!

Can't wait until the next chapter.

please please update soon! i need to know whats going to happen!

the pack that was broken... would that be refrencing the pact of steel between italy and germany that italy ended up breaking when he swiched to the allied side?

please update soon! i really like your story! are you going to do a chapter on the axis next?

Oh my gosh, this is such a great story! I absolutely love it! And this latest chapter...*sob* Poor Francis! I really have a soft-spot for Francis/Jeanne...my poor babies! :'( But was that a hint of Franada I saw there? I love that pairing too...my headcanon is that France fell in love with Canada, but was guilty because he felt like he was betraying Jeanne, and when Mattie found out, he made sure that France knew that he could love Jeanne and Canada too, equally...that he wouldn't have to give her up.

Gah! Okay, sorry, weird rant is weird...I just got really sentimental there, sorry! ; But anyway, this is a really great story. Could you possibly write more soon?! I'd really like to see more!