Hmm... I like it on the whole and Lily's character wasn't off/cliché/too young/too old, or anything. It does seem a bit odd that Lily wouldn't ask more questions, though - but I know you had to wrap it up somewhere so it wouldn't end up in a novel...

It's so cut x) you're my hero daddy xD

loved it anyway

Awww! It was very sweet. Not crap at all. Stop bad mouthing yourself Azzie!

Was Lily Jr. named after Luna? I didn't even know that! :O (I'm /really/ paying too much attention to the dark side, lol. And I can't STAND that epilogue)

Anyway, 'next gen' isn't my thing but I found this readible, so that's a compliment to you ;)

This isn't bad, Azzie! It's quite good. I love stressed!Harry at the beginning - "...so...lively.." made me laugh out loud. And little Lily is adorable. Though I find it hard to believe that this is the first time Harry told Lily where she got her name. The last sentence is very sweet! :)

*Stares*

Did you just... did you just... did.. did...

Did you just write a NextGen?

Wow.

But seriously, though, I loved this - light, funny, yet it was clearly written by you - the 'so... lively...' screamed 'Inkfire! Inkfire! This is another masterpiece written by Inkfire! All hail this her!' and... yeah.

Do excuse my poor reviewing skills...

Back to the fic.

The way you portrayed Bella's emotions were - I mean -

O_O

(I'm still working on the fact that you did NOT write a Bellatrix fic - yes, I know you've done it before, but... still)

Back to the fic.

I loved the brightness in it, yet one could sense the tension when Harry told Lily about the war - although I can't help but wonder, why did you not mention Bella? Who are you and what have you done to Guiziemine?

...This review is just plain silly.

I'll just go with a 'Loved this!' and then I'll make a small cross on the rubric in front of the 'Add Story to Favorites' inscription, and then I'll hit the 'Submit Feedback/Review' button with loads and loads of dramatic gestures, and then I'll hide in a corner because this bloody stupid-silly-foolish-embarrassing fic is probably full of writing errors and right now my PC is going bananad, can't see what I'm writing, bye, gotta submit this thing before it's deleted...

Azzie! Oh Azzie this was so incredibly SWEET! I can't get over how adorably nice and cute and everything this was. It's definitely not your normal sort of stuff, but I loved it anyway. You're definitely good at writing this light, fluffy sort of stuff. No jokes.

The whole idea of having Lily Luna draw a scar on her forehead was wonderful, and Harry's explanation was perfect. I think you characterized them both wonderfully.

Seriously, this was awesome. )