Nice!

Seras shows a really sweet and cheerful side in contrast to Vlad's dark personality. Very interesting this alternative timeline in which Dracula conquers England defeating 100 years before Abraham Van Hellsing and the love story between a heroine and a demon king. The only flaw of the plot is that it is a bit 'too religious.

I really enjoyed this story (along with your other stories). It is well-written, the characters are all IC, and their different driving forces/motivation were believable.
Keep up the good work. :)

Also, a very late sidenote/fun fact: The blood soup you're describing is most likely inspired by a real dish called "Sortsuppe/Blodsuppe" (Danish for "Black soup/Blood soup").
It's a popular dish in South Jutland (Southern part of Denmark) and Scania (Southern part of Sweden) and is made with prunes, apples, and (of course) A LOT OF geese blood. The soup is often served with small buns made of buckwheat grain or barley flour.
(I'm from Denmark so that's why I know of this dish - I've never tried it though).

To be honest, when I discovered that you intended to cross Hellsing and the Story of Esther, I was skeptical, very nearly hit the back button. I am glad I didn't. This story was beautifully written from start to finish. From character depiction and development, to imagery and ethos. This was masterfully done and is doubtlessly my favorite Hellsing fanfiction so far. I have already read and re-read it multiple times. I awoke this morning with nothing particular to do, I opened my browser, and discovered the first chapter of this story loaded on my screen. I now find myself lost in it once again, only taking brief pause to write this review. And so, before I go back to reading, I must say to you: Thank you for taking the time to write this, I pray your day ends as good as mine started.

*sniff sniff* You did make the sparkly vampire a traitor! Yes!

PLEASE tell me you you made Edward *the sparkly vampire* second in command of the country :) .

I cant help but notice the similarities between your work and a movie named "One Night with The King"... Any relation?

Their opinions about how waves are to behave is very sexist.
Also Alucard seems out of character

Well done. The characters seem mostly accurate in both universes. It was very well written. The only thing I would have done would have had Vlad take the field with his queen. You show Vlad and Dracula, but not Alucard. Have him do his level zero stuff or something. It would have deviated a bit more, but been more kick ass. All in all, well done.

Not half bad but personally I'd like the idea of Seras killing Dracula once he's taken over instead: it does take a man to kill a monster after all. Actually that's not half bad of an idea now that I think about it...

I usually don't read romance fics but this is off to a promising start. If I had to guess this Dracula is much different than the Alucard we know and love. He's probably grown complacent on his throne. I wonder what would happen if Alucard met this Dracula?

Awwwwwww this ending! And may I say.. Holy fucking shit you are BRILLIANT in writing that Impalement scene in the beginning of this..it's horrific but wonderfully written!

I loved the story. It was nice and descriptive. I'm sort of glad you skipped the battle in the last chapter. Battles can be sort of a drag.

I loved this story! Had to pause my reading for a bit right in the middle of the story but I finally finished! I'm surprised at how much I loved this. Not because I was expecting the story to be terrible but because of the religious element. Being a Christian, I was pleasantly surprised to see Christianity playing such a large role in the story. And to be interwoven in so it wasn't overbearing. And Jayne? I giggled when he was introduced. I'm such a huge fan of Firefly! Not such a fan of Edward Cullen so I adored your portrayal of him. Thank you for such a well-written story. It's definitely a favorite!

P.S. After rereading my earlier review, I realize I sound a little critical of your grammar. My point was that the mistakes were surprising given how well the chapter was written. Sorry if I offended! Thanks again! :D

I like the first chapter. Integra as a mother is an interesting idea. Yet I was thrown off a little by the few errors. Namely: cloddy instead of cloudy, moister instead of moisture and poor instead of pour. Otherwise, it was nicely written. Going to continue on!