thanks for the read but you have left it on a cliff hanger and they spoil good stories

Love your story! Longer review at chapter 8.

Love your story!

I love your story. All characters were ridiculously right on the mark. So off to read your crossover - love The Doctor as well as The Mentalist. Hard to say who is my favorite. Hmmm maybe Who IS my favorite. No. No. No... I truly love Patrick. Okay I'm off to read your other story. May I say I would love to read more of your stories of the Red Haze Universe.

So, I know that it's been 4 years now since you last updated, but I really hope that you will update this someday soon. Please I'm begging you. This plot is awesome and your writing too. Pleeeease give this story a closure. I hope that you read this and remember that there are still people waiting for the next chapters, and that you will find the motivation to write them. Thank you for reading this :)
Bye ;D

more. i need more. this is an amazing story. please write more.

I wanna a bannana!
hahaha, I knew why the murder was on the 8th floor before I even read the letter ((I'm smart like that ;) ))
and I really can't critisize you on anything, tiny grammer things, thats about it.
I'm lovin' this story so far and I'm looking forward to what kind of puzzles the team will face.
Update soon please!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I LOVE THIS! I started reading and just couldn't stop! Now I'm off to read more of you're stories, I LOVE THEM! :D

I just wanted to say that I don't usually read fan fiction but this one really caught my eye and I had to read it. It's so terribly good that I hated the fact that I couldn't read anymore of it. Please, please, please write more as soon as possible ( I assume you watch tv shows and like me can't wait for 'the next episode') so c'mon please. Anyway loved the fact that there wasn't any romance and it was just so like the show, very well written with just the right character personalities and nothing to unbelievable or boring. Love this story!

sorry don't actually have account. this is absolutely awesome! i wanted to wait till i finished the whole thing to review. it would be even more awesome if you could write one where Jane gets shot. no im not crazy i just like it when something major happens to the main character and no im not actually jane but i do think like him sometimes. please write more.

sincerely,
patrick jane

I really love this story! It's great and suspenseful, and it keeps me guessing all the time on what's gonna happen next! I totally know how you feel with the whole updating thing! I haven't updated my stories in a long time yet, and I feel horrible for not doing so!

I can't wait to see what happens next, and what Red John has in store for Jane!

I'm already dying for an update! I hope you have the time to update soon! :D

Ah! I did it! Again. And loved it twice more than previous time.

I feel for poor Jane.
I've been kangaroo-ing around my flat for week already, tempted to grab Grandma's crutch...
Can imagine those flights of stairs all the way up to 8th floor...

Anyway, waiting for next chapter.
P.S. been to visit your other story already, only now realized it was you who wrote that one.. or that the one who wrote BBAST was you...
okay it didn't make sense...
i'm sleepy and happily Jane-loaded now;)

Have fun writing next chapter! XD

PLeaseee continueeeee im begging!

Wow, I couldn't stop reding this! You have done incredibly an job, so cudo ponts to you!. But I was disappointed when I couldn't conintue to the next chapter because it hadn't been written. So please continue this story I am truly enjoyng it! :)