Reviews for New beginning |
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bulk Locke the the grim head chapter 8 . 3/29/2018 update |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Please continue your work as soon as you can can't wait to read next chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2017 Please continue as soon as you can |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/18/2016 Please continue the next chapter as soon as you can |
engkeat.goh chapter 8 . 9/11/2016 Will Itachi tap finger so easily? I start to dislike this story. |
engkeat.goh chapter 5 . 9/11/2016 I don't think it's need to introduce Move, atleast not all. |
engkeat.goh chapter 4 . 9/11/2016 This Itachi is a bit OC. He shall has reason to become Trainer. With Itachi, Murkrow or Honchkrow should be suit him. I really like Pokespe's Silver's Murkrow or Honchkrow, especially Murkrow. Instead become friend brightly, I more like join for some reason like One Piece. Can you make it? |
engkeat.goh chapter 3 . 9/11/2016 Itachi should know that Trainer not as brightly as normal think. Not about bad Trainer, is about Trainer's reality. Trainer captured Pokemon for their dream but called Pokemon had same dream, don't you think this reality should be known by Itachi. With his character him must thought already. |
engkeat.goh chapter 1 . 9/11/2016 Good. What kind of Pokemon Itachi will has? |
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 9/17/2015 Wow, "walks in and said"? Dammit, stick with either past tense (walked in and said) or present tense (walks in and says)! Also, your grammar needs a bit of work. |
Laud de Saturno chapter 8 . 9/11/2015 Coloco a está obra entre mis favoritos de este crossover, veo que no ha sido actualizado en bastante tiempo lo cual es una lástima. Sigue con el buen trabajo :3 |
uhhhhhh chapter 5 . 11/23/2014 oh wow such a coiencedence he just happened to hit the murkrow from before. sorry but i'm to laazy to tye correctly. :/ |
Charmander33 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013 Are you discontinuing this story? |
Rosco Peeko Trane chapter 3 . 2/8/2013 Near death experience? By a Beedrill? Come onnnnn lmao. I don't think a whole swarm of Beedrill coming at him head on could even touch him xD |
Rosco Peeko Trane chapter 2 . 2/8/2013 Sounded like a Glameow. Also, how does Itachi not notice it? He's freaking Itachi XD but I won't ruin your story or anything I'll just internally monologue my own alterations as I see fit :P |