Nice work! It was a little short, but I liked how he changed from the beginning to the end of the fic. There were some run-on sentences, but it was easily readable.

lol I know what you mean about finishing a story at 4 am; I've done that too. xD Get some sleep; you deserve it. :p

Twin

Beautiful :') awwwww love it.

this is a really good story! and it was my first story of Bridge to Terabithia. It really reflects their friendship, and the book and the film both were sad when she died, I just recently watched the film once again and I cried my eyes out when Leslie died, even when I knew what happened.

All I wanted to say was, good work!

COOL! i like it. its quite sad, the movie was good too!

aw.. so sweet

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!

Very nicely written! Welcome to the BtT fanfiction community, and I hope to see more BtT fanfics from you in the future!

This is so bittersweet; kind of like the movie itself, which, by the way, was the first movie in a LONG time that made me cry. Anyway, this is a nice take on the aftermath. In the movie, you're under the impression that Jess has moved on after building the bridge and showing Maybelle the magical world he and Leslie created. Overall good job! :3