I enjoyed this, good job. Would love to see more added:)

that was extremely good. i liked how you described their relationship. please write more!

hey this fic is great but i have a question what was the name of the vampire guy that used the swords?

please email me and tell me

OMG i love chupa (matt schulze)! great story... can't wait for the next chapter!

Woww very good

Personaly I didn't get any slashy vibes when I watched the movie but this story is well written. You put some intense emotion into a scene that was just supposed to be adrenalin based whcih is good becuase I felt the movie lacked a lot of emotion that could have made it better.

You should should write some more stories and base then around less focused on characters in the movie becuase this one was good ( Chupa was my favorite vampire too so do more stories on him!)

Very good story-a tragic poem too! You should write a whole story through Chupa's eyes in Bloodhunt.

You did a wonderful job with this. It puts some emotion into the adrenaline rush of that scene. Nice job!

That was a wonderful POV of Chupa. I felt the slashy vibes from those two. And Chupa was really torn up over Preist's death. I loved this! If you write more I'll lova ya for it!

That was really good. And I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thought those two were slashy.

Awwww, damn poor Chupa! I was thinking while I watched the movie how sad and mad he looked. Your story gave a really good explanation as to why Chupa looked like that when Priest died. Keep it up!(well not the killing at least)

Poor Chupa..i think i see that scene in a new light now. Wonderful work.

Wow, that was really, really good. I'm not a huge fan a slash, but you provided a reasonable explanation as to why Chupa seemed so destroyed at the loss of Priest. The emotions and everything you gave him rang true. Perfect!