Adorable tale!

Cuuuuuuute! This is so sweet -*_*-

well...that was frickin adorable!

I've got goosebumps oh yeah, goosebumps, you hear me GOOSEBUMPS!
Such amazing writing and just pure fluff, very very well done...:D

That was lovely. Very well written.

That was beautiful and very sweet.

hi there

just finished reading your newest A/M fic when i noticed that you wrote a good deal of all those one-shots i read here recently: and i luv them all, especially those placed in canon era.

but browsing through your uploads once again, i remebered an aspect that confused me sometimes while reading your fics: your use of tense.

im no engl native, so perhaps im just not used this usage, but every now and then you start writing your fic in present tense and then suddenly your using past tense; or the other way around - and without any reason as it seems. sometimes it even happens within one and the same sentence.

e.g. "Merlin's eyes flashed gold, his smile relaxed and he begun to drift off to sleep, sinking deeper into the water before Arthur pulls him back up".

actually it doesnt really matter, but trying to stick to one tense might add to the pleasure of reading your fics even more _

so beautiful and hot!

awwww just awww great job i loved it soo much!