Super sexy

I liked it alot! It was cute and touching and I would have never thought of this. Good job!

Could u like doa Sequle

I really like your writing style. o3o Great story, cute and fluffy. :DDD

awsome

Um...first, I just wanted to say that Kio probably wouldn't find Ritsuka attractive, considering he always tries to persuade Soubi to get with him, and that he often berates Soubi, and once even told him he had a Lolita complex (basically, shotacon). Also, the grammar was really bad. I'm sorry if I sound rude, but that's not what I'm trying to do. I'm just trying to give you constructive criticism. And...well, I say that, but I also just didn't like it very much. It wasn't all that engaging, and the story-line was weak. Please remember I'm not trying to flame, but just giving my opinion. They're two very different things, and I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings.

Oh Kio's such a hypocrite calling Soubi a pervert all the time! This was really funny and nosebleed-worthy! :D

When I saw that it was gonna be about math problems, I figured it would be the 'add the bed, subtract the clothes, divide the legs, pray you don't multiply' thing. XD still, I enjoyed this quite a bit. 3

Kyu~ I normally hate threesomes but it just works so well with Soubi, Ritsuka, and Kio. ;v; A bit of helpful criticism though: I found the format of this story sort of odd and there were a couple of grammar issues that made me feel like an English teacher. o-o

Like, at one point you wrote "...Me and Kio gets to..." when it should be "...Kio and I get to..." Sorry! It just bothered me. ovo;

Haha, RITSUKA SHOULD PLAY THAT WITH THOSE TWO MORE OFTEN! XD

It was good, I liked it. Spelling was great and so was the story! _

glad it was a request! nice lemon for all 3 !