your yandere Alfred is wonderful and I love it so muchh

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idk sometimes I just sit around and question why I ship this so much and then I run across fanfics like this and I'm like "Oh. Right. Fuckin' love hate relationships" anyways congrats you made me love this pairing even more.

XD I LOOOOOVE your writing, don't get me wrong. BUT, I have to say, I think I like your little notes at the beginning and the ending of all your fics. XD 'Specially this one's ending thing. Keep up the amazing work, and make more one shots, da? Thanks!

-dies from blood loss-

It's just amazing.

this is hot.. smexy... wonderful~ Alfred is just wonderful! please write more!

that was beautiful actually, i am definitely hoping for more.

love your stories so much! can't stop reading!

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What is it about nuts America anyway? I need to quit looking up stories like this ... ;)

Yeah, its a dubcon. Just try using their names more at the beginning because theres a bit of confusion over whos who.

Otherwise, that was fucking hot! İ think america could be yandere. İts true that many countries will say that they hate us... Except turkey for some reason... Everyone else just thinks its cool to be here but americans are uncouth heathens and generally dont like us. Sadly, its easy to tell even as a tourist in those countries *shrug* but i like where you took this.

Getting tired of my reviews? I know you will soon! 3 and you already know I'm gonna say the usual! ;D I actually liked this alot despite you saying it's bad. MY writing is bad. Trust me. :D

I don't really know if I like yandere America or not, but I always love an uke Russia xD

This was a dreat story, keep up the awsome work!

I so super love it when other people have their dirty way with Russia for some odd reason. I was like, NOSE BLEED when America said "'I hate you because you'll never let me love you.'" I so love yandere America. But I hope you don't mind if I gave you just a little advise. Describe how it feels around America's erection. For accuracy, anal sex is nothing like vaginal sex. It usually requires a lot more lubrication and is a lot less soft than a woman. To put it bluntly, it's gritty. Russia would be in a lot of pain right then, obviously, and the body would be trying to force the intrusion out, though because of the stimulation of the prostate, him being forced into arousal would be accurate. But the way you wrote it he would be into it anyway because secretly Russia loves to dominated, teehee. Now, I'm a large fan of S&M, so I think a little more degradation would be nice, like boot licking, or first putting a loaded gun inside of the victim. Maybe stepping on some fingers, hair pulling, at least. But I don't know if you're super into S&M as I am. Not a lot of people are. But as far as it goes, it was quite a good try! And I really hope to see more of this sort of stuff from you very soon! Because I need a fix.

Oooh. Ooooh, that was very good and I am most impressed! ANGSTY AMERICA ftw!

Also, that was pretty hot for a rape fic. Just saying. :P

I was a little reluctant to review just because you said America would rape Russia again if I dent and personally I kinda really like dub-con and rape, soooooo...

Anyway, I liked this, even if it did seem a tad rushed. I'm trying not to be a bitch and give concrit instead of just acting like a imposing grammar/plot whore.

I have the vague feeling I am being most unhelpful.

Btw love me some yandere!America. I mean, it can't /always/ be Russia being all yandere.

~Shadow-chan sends love