This is awesome. I read this just after re-watching Prince Caspian on TV (our DVD is broken because we watched it too many times) and my love for Narnia has increased ten-fold. :D

Absolutely beautiful! Happy Writing:)

That was pretty sweet and I liked the mild romance from the characters in different worlds. Good job! :)

I lovee this! Great job! So cute!

So this was so cute - I loved how she was carrying around the library book as an excuse, and how Susan saw right through her. I really love your Lucy, and can I just say that Edmund without a shirt... /faints.

I really enjoyed this, Bri - I love your your Edmund and Lucy interacted - they just seemed so perfect together.

continue. PLEASE. :D

This is so cute, Bri.

Really, I loved the whole thing. I loved their relationship and him fighting, even without a shirt on, and gosh it was so cute. The tiara part made me smile :)

Terrific job.

Bri, this was ! I adored it so much, especially your shirtless Edmund. Because he's shirtless. Y'know.

Your characters were wonderful and I liked Susan's little part where she told Lucy where Edmund was. I adored Lucy stealing his crown because it was so innocent and lovely and it just hilighted their relationship.

AND HE GIVES HER A TIARA AND MAKES HER HIS PRINCESS. That bit, my friend, was perfection.

This was amazing, Bri, I loved it all :3 Especially because it was EdmundLucy and it's an epically wonderful pairing. And it was beautifully written. And I'm going to reread it now...

Oh, Edmund... I think just about every girl had a crush on him, once (even if they won't admit it) xD.

Before I read this story I didn't even realize how cute Lucy and Edmund are together! Lucy's always been one of those next-gen characters I sort of ignored, but this version of Lucy's so... playful and adorable.

I love the theme of magic throughout the story; perfect for the crossover :)

-Steph

Oh, Bri, this was just a-m-a-z-i-n-g (to borrow Drishti's penchant for crazy formatting ;P)! It really, really was; I think you totally did Edmund and Lucy justice and caught their playful, innocent relationship /exactly/! It was truly just wonderful! &hearts

Adding Susan was such a brilliant touch - I loveloveloved how she could so easily see the chemistry between them and she was all "Uh-huh, sure, you're going to the library, BTW, he's in the fencing room, winkwink, nudgenudge," and I was all 'hahaha, how awesome!' and she was just terrific! :D

Oh, and Edmund? Shirtless? -droolswoon- (I'll call that a dwoon! P) He was just /gah/ and /hot/ and wonderful and sosososo sweet at the end and he was brilliant! Although, why wasn't Peter shirtless? C'mon, two shirtless Kings, fighting each other? ;)

AND LUCY! There's no forgetting her, after all ;) She was just equally wonderful and I adored how she was so shy and all - so much like my Lucy! - and I loved her blushing! Oh, and that sentence of "She chooses left." was so dramatic and romantic and I just loved it! And - and - and her running off with Edmund's crown! I swear, that made me squee in delight because it was so /adorable/ and so funny and I just loved it! :D

Oh, and the /ending/! 'Twas brilliant. Him giving her the tiara and her being princess and then stealing his crown /again/ was just so perfect and I loved it! :D

All in all, amazing job, and keep writing! &hearts

Okay, now for a real review:

1) Susan.

D'awwww! She was all "I know you love my brother so just jump him already", and it was so fricking perfect!

"He's in the fencing room."

LoveloveloveloveLOVE!

2) Lucy.

SHE WAS TOOO CUTE IN THIS. "She chooses left." Oh. My. Lord. Utter /gorgeousness/.

And now, the best for last:

3) Edmund.

hgofdakjhfhsadglalrgf!

A to the D to the O to the R. A to the B to the L to the E.

A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E. He was all- *sexy* -and I was all- *dies* -and ohmygodjustkillmenow: HE WAS SHIRTLESS.

Er, I think that's enough fangirling, right?

Basically, this love, lil sis.

I HAVE SUCH AN AMAZING LITTLE SISTER.

And ohmylord, I saw the dedication at the top, and I died. Fo realz, I read it and started smiling like a crazy person (which I am).

Now we just have to wait for Pearl to tell you that you've won. ;D

(sorry for any failures; I can barely read what I'm typing)

Love you!

~Drishti

LOVEEEEEE THIS!

LOVEEEEEE THIS!