Harry’s a schmuck in this chapter. Jane was right...”you, you, you...”

What does Harry think happened the first 2 decades of his childrens’ lives when they were hurt or disappointed? JANE picked up the pieces, especially when Harry caused it by being a dead-beat dad

This is Jane’s decision... glad it ended with that scenario.

Just re-read these two lovely stories too! Wonderfully and skillfully written! I love the way you write Harry and Ruth. x

Love it! :)

LBx

Oh that was gorgeous! And I LOVE the 'or the beginning' at the end too D

Oh, this was just beautiful! I was crying when Graham helped Harry with the bow tie. And Ruth with her "mind the gap" thong... I was laughing and crying at the same time! Incredible job! :)

Lovely lovely lovely! Great end to the story, the whole thing is just fabulous :) x

Beautiful beautiful beautiful!

xx

Awww! That is so lovely!

Gem x

Aw that's just beautiful. They're getting married, Grahams's doing well, Jane's doing well. Everyone seems to be happy. Just perfect :) xxx

This is just stunningly touching - perfectly written and simply beautiful. I'm so happy for Graham and Harry both. Just amazing! :)

Aww! This is just lovely. Great stuff :) x

Of course Graham received the most horrible news imaginable, but I'm glad he took it so well! And the fact that he's getting better and that his relationship with Harry has been restored is just beautiful :)

Can't wait for the epilogue!

That was such a touching chapter! Harry has been through so much emotionally and staying strong that it was good for him to be human in front of his son and for Graham to embrace him too. Looks like the strong character is part of all the Pearce family - ex-wife included. Its also a good touch that Harry can stand back and realistically appraise Jane without bitterness - he might not like her but can admire her. Equally good is the idea that real life will most times make you change your plans - like Harry with his date with Ruth tonight, but on a biggger scale, Harry's relationship with Ruth against the backdrop of his family prolems with Graham and Jane - both unexpected and both life changing. You've written Harry as being very realistic in both Sins stories and I'm really looking forward to the epilogue - as I'm sure is Ruth ;)

Another lovely chapter and I'm glad Graham is OK - I could keep reading this story, you write them all (particularly Harry and Ruth) so well.

I'm so proud of Graham!

Please update soon - it's lovely xx