I like the set up of this. I wish it continued.

Personally I didn't understand the point of Souji/Teddie walking in and their conversation about joining? It was written a bit confusingly.
Also I was under the impression the two girls went to a secluded area, so how were they seen so quickly?

Anyway. Like I said I really like the setup, I wish there were a part two. Maybe they could go back to their room?

Huh. Interesting. And possible, but not likely.

Ah?! Why end so soon :(

and then yosuke died...

This was my first time reading a yuri/shoujo ai story.

I quite liked it. You portrayed the characters nicely and I think they acted very naturally - well, given the situation they're in. :)

It was a nice story!

well written story poor teddie getting corrupted!

RAICHUUU n_n I'm finna have to favorite this story, I must say.