Amazing story. I loved the plot, the characters, the twists, the scenes, everything. you are an amazing writer. please keep on writing

I enjoyed this. It was a little jumpy with the transitions, but good overall.

So cute and sweet.

I grinned when I think of Naraku getting pale with fear

I loved this story!

How come every time I read this story, though I really do like this story, there is always something being added or taken out!

I must say, this was awesomely crafted. I loved how Inuyasha's feelings towards Kagome's deepened, and vice versa. *thumbs up* where they were lodging with Koga and where Kagome was full of misery hearing kagura and Inuyasha in the other room... Particularly splendid. However, the ending is confusing... For such an interesting, forbidden relationship it would have been great if we could get a thorough resolution... Keeping Inuyasha and Kagome together of course! But good work.

naw. cute :3
i think u kinda jumped the gun a little with some scenes, specifically right there at the end. its kinda hard to decipher wats happening and where its happening because u changed scenes without much description or clarification (just towards the end where they were caught in bed together). the rest of it before that scene created a fantastic story though
plz continue writing :D

a little confusing at the end, but all around a good story

I like this story its cute(:

Inukag foreveer!

I really liked this one. Surprised me by having Sesshomaru be the king, I never even thought of that. But I knew as soon as you mentioned Naraku that he was up to something. Glad everything worked out for Inuyasha and Kagome in the end. Great job.

You are the BEST

The best ever

This is mind blowing

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat was sooo sweeeeet