shingami false gods real gods carnt die our god jesus jahova cannot die

I cried to this chapter

Great job please continue

You know their is a such things as harmony you can't have good without bad.

yeah reminds me of a more mellow sasuke
i think thats the word im looking for...

Hiks, I want this story to continue. Poor Naruto

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Idk, I thought it was pretty good. Interesting idea, a cute kind of drama, a real kind of problem emotional thing you see in both animes. I wanted more blood and gore and fucked shit but I always want that so I wasn't really disappointed in this. It had no love interest kind of thing, thank you for that as well. I saw some spelling mistakes some things that could have been changed but they were quite easily looked over but if you don't like it then that's it, you know? Don't do a thing if you hate it.

Simply put, fuck that bullshit.

too much shitty drama and angst. I thought you would fucking get it to stop at some point but it didn't seem to be that way..I'm dropping this

Why is naruto is speaking like Yoda..? i know he has an insanity of hollow but "Activate your bankai did you?" fucking laugh out loud bro.

i don't really understand why Ishida became Neji, wouldn't Sasuke be a better choice? loss of a clan(Quincy's not a clan but you know) overall broodiness and rivalry with the main character.

Ass. Now im crying.

Following my previous review. I am disappointed with this and slighlty angered. So I will follow by saying, to all of you whom may be reading this. I hardly see why you all 'cried' around ch4

I'm not even going to bother logging in for this. Being an author myself I get it, things come up and we might not be able to continue. But if you go this far in, then give some poor lanky ass excuse, it's bull.
I'm quite sick of this crap and although I thoughourly enjoyed reading this, you should just take it down to save others the disappointment of being let down, yet again, by another author