Woah.
Woah.
Woah.
This was awesome.

loved butters as a real vampire! it suits him so well in a freaky way...

i like your writing style, too. The gory parts really contrated with your choice of words and the overall atmosphere.

thumbs up!;)

Ooo, alternate thingmagigy from what happened in the show, cool! You should totally add more chapters where Stan and Kyle find out, that would be awesome! Write On!

-Randomstalker

So well written. His emotions during the scene in his bedroom leap off the page. I agree with his statement that its not butters. I guess it ends there but I would've liked to see some kind of aftermath when everyone finds out about butters. I love this.

So well written. His emotions during the scene in his bedroom leap off the page. I agree with his statement that its not butters. I guess it ends there but I would've liked to see some kind of aftermath when everyone finds out about butters. I love this.