On a scale of 1-10, this is probably a 5. Not the worst, but certainly not the best. A lot of spelling mistakes (aloowing? How did you not catch that?), and the writing overall felt very juvenile.

If your going to use a foreign language, do some research. 'Thank you' in French is 'Merci' not 'mercy'.

Good story, I like that Hermione and Harry got together and Ginny amd Neville. Those are good pairings, I don't think Ron would really be able to make Hermione happy anyway. Really nice story.

lol cute and simple. nice

go ron and ginny bashing!

This story was very good.

It was good that Harry and Hermione got together.

It was good that Ginny and Neville stayed loyal to Harry and Hermione.

It was funny that Ron got pushed in the lake twice.

Keep up the good work.

Continue please!