Cute

Amazing...

Hi I loved your story on jilly it was superbly well thought
Our the only criticism I've got is that it wasn't long enough as I would be delighted to read many more pages on their unique rocky road to happiness plus
With all of their friends there Alice prewett frank longbottom, remuslupin,Mary MacDonald ,Sirius black,
Gideon and Fabian prewettetc you captured their every
Emotion including their hidden insecurities with so much
Dignity and compassion that I'm hoping the head s at
Fan fiction appreciate your excellent story telling its
Totally outstanding please write more I'm hooked.
Love Elizabeth skinner from Australia.

Well she's certainly the only witch whom kept him
Absolutely fascinated for seven long years what a coup
Plus she knows how to pull his strings it's adorable but
He won't catch on just yet he's having to much fun in
A broom closet ,it's incredibly amusing and idlike to
Thank you for having James as a grown up. Not shouting
Vile nasty names at lily he's very impressive though still
A prankster at heart though he should've listened to Remus better he's Remus and thank you again for
Polishing it up its outstandingly brilliant and intensely
Magical written with great love plus an incredible active
Imagination and so much colourful creativity coming
Through its simply unforgettably perfectly written
Elizabeth skinner.

That was lovely, my favorite line was "I'll show you articulation" I died right there... Aaah

It's great. The lengths James will go to.

GREAT YEAHHHHHHHHHHH

So good - loved it!

LOVE THIS

AMAZING! I love it!

Nice story, really cute. I am an American and I have heard of Stockholm Syndrome plenty of times before. Anyways, great work.

A highly entertaining one-shot that I enjoyed until nearly the end, when I was put off by a few errors: Anyways is not a word and being articulate doesn't have anything to do with kissing. However, the banter was very well done. I liked that you didn't beat around the bush. Lily was super. :D Thanks for sharing!

Aw, I love this :)

~BML ;)

That's hilarious. I watched the whole thing in my mind and I just couldn't stop smiling. It was a great story.

loved it! it was hilarious! i love lily and james! you did a great job! thanks for writing it! .