What a shame that this was never finished.

I can't believe I just found these stories. I read them both, and you seriously need to update cause this is one of the best fics I've read in a very long time.
I really hope to see an update. I really want to know what happens next. :)

Ok. I've just read through the ENTIRE story... Well, both stories. This is fucking fantastic. I WISH you would update. This is, without a doubt, one of the very BEST Shakarian fics I've ever read. Brilliant writing, amazing backgrounds, the OC's were just perfect, Garrus was just amazing, and Lina... Ohhh, Lina. I love Lina so much.

She reminds me of my Taren in my own Shakarian fic, and I have to say, this is the ONLY Shepard I've ever read that even came close. Just brilliant. Please, PLEASE continue this. I will throw panties at you if you do. XD

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, and I sincerely hope to see more of this, SOON! :D

love

Holy geez, I thought this story was dead. Like it a lot...minor typos in Chapter 1, but otherwise it's solid.

Thanks for coming back to us. The tragedy of a pre-ME "relationship" between Garrus and Shepard really comes through, here. Well done.

So glad this trilogy is progressing! I really do hope you get the chance to carry this on through 3.

Cool. Yea, we'll stay and hang around with ya's... with Zaeed Massani.

Oh how I missed your pop culture references!

I'm sooo happy, another chapter, yeah! I read it all, both of them and it's very good. The "I can't put it down even if it's past 1 am" kind of good. Im looking for the next chapter!

I seriously love your writing so much. This story is to die for and I can't wait till your next update.

Thank you!

T

Hey. An update! I like it. And chapters 2-5 are all different.
I like them too, and it feels like the story has a clearer direction. I miss a couple of scenes from the original chapters (ok, mostly I miss the "Jesus" joke), but I enjoyed the current versions.

So glad to see an update for this in my inbox! :D

I am so sad that you never finished. :( the first story was amazing, and I was loving this one too. But I am happy you took a hiatus rather than just ramble on and let the story fall apart. I hope that someday you get inspired to finish.

pity your muse went bye bye hope it comes back someday for this story but if not i will still love what is already here :)

Pleaese continue...I really like this story...

Good luck! It was a very nice read. Thank you ;3

Miss this story greatly. The first was such a refreshing look at the pre-ME Shepard we don't get often.