Wow this seems like it would be an amazing story. I hope
You would consider updating it!

me ha gustado la historia, y espero leer mucho mas de ella.

so sad

oh wow

NO

Oooh! Like it :D Great job so far, I am quite interested :)

ooo love it x

Wow, surprisingly I really enjoyed this chapter. It's definately something that I personally don't read everyday but that's just me as I tend to stick with the 'original' Hermione Granger and tweak her a bit, but I must admit I'm actually intrigued to see where this will go. :D

I thought the concept was very interesting but what made it even more appealing was your writing. It really captivated me and it almost felt as though I was in the moment with them, so a big congrats for that :)

Well, I hope chapter 2 will be up sometime soon because I'm looking forward to it, Great job so far :)