looking forward to chapter 14? Good story

I tried to read this... I really did... but the center formatting is just preventing me. I'm sorry...

A good chapter, though it is more of a setting up kind of thing...nonetheless, wonderful, I look forward to the coming battle...no doubt you will make it spectacular...and out of curiosity, how long do you plan on making the story?

engaging, and I anxiously await the next chapter

you god dam tease. I need more then this.

Cool story bro

pls more! liked it

Very interesting concept. The story is good so far, but I see that you haven't updated since October 2011. I hope that you are going to continue with it and haven't given up on it. I look forward to reading the rest.

Interesting. I have to say though, Harry really has the habit of having the stuffing knocked out of him, doesn't he?

Not too bad so far. You have some strange grammatical errors, though.

Really great job so far, Dresden Files can go into so many different directions, I wish it had more fanfiction like this.

Great story but aren't there 4 vampire courts (shiro mentioned the jade court in book 5)

interesting

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Can't believe I'm the first to revew this. first things first I went through all the Dresden books in 2 and half months. So I've been living and drinking Dresden. You didn't even try to deal with the ending of "Changes" which is good. Only Jim deserves to do that.

This is the beginning of a excellent story. You captured the feel of the Universe. You got Harry down as well. Dragons are something that Jim hasn't elaborated on so it will be interesting to see what you do with them. I'm looking forward to see where this goes.-TDX