| Reviews for Seeing Daylight |
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robertsbella2 chapter 13 . 2/24 Cute story, loved it. |
2old4fanfic chapter 13 . 9/9/2019 Nothing like horses and happy endings |
2old4fanfic chapter 10 . 9/8/2019 So adorable |
Kaltan chapter 13 . 7/21/2019 Great story , thanks for sharing |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/25/2019 Oh she knows whats shes doing...she knew he would offer. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24/2019 She acts like this when shethinks he’s married? She is disgusting. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/6/2019 I like that Bella moved on and had a real genuine love with Riley. It’s usually written that her other men are secretly gay, abusive, cheating, or just a platonic relationship presented as more. I get that everyone wants Edward and Bella to be soulmates but it’s unrealistic. |
Wild Child 1954 chapter 1 . 11/22/2018 I'm new to this site and just found your story. I went to your profile to see the pics of the mentioned tattoos but there's nothing there! I'd really like to see the tattoo of the horse. Is there any way to see this? I'm really enjoying the story at the start of Chapter 7! |
twiclare chapter 13 . 4/25/2018 Aww, they seem like good parents! |
twiclare chapter 11 . 4/25/2018 I'm glad that Bella is at peace with her decision and is no longer feeling guilty about moving on with Edward! |
twiclare chapter 9 . 4/25/2018 I'm so glad that Bella and Riley truly loved each other and had a great marriage. Edward has to compete with the memory with someone who was unselfish and loved Bella wholeheartedly. |
twiclare chapter 7 . 4/24/2018 I'm enjoying this so far with your far from perfect characters! |
dancer54 chapter 13 . 3/12/2018 Cowboy honor |
naive sweet girl chapter 11 . 2/25/2018 it was amazing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2017 I’m glad Bella wasn’t pinning away over Edward for the last decade. That happens too often in fan fictions. She pines away, refusing to move on and date while Edward sleeps around. I like that she truly loved Riley and that Riley loved her too. Their relationship was so sweet. That’s another difference between your story and most other fan fictions. Bella never gets a happy marriage. Its always loveless, abusive, or her husband is cheating or even gay. It’s like writers only want her to be loved by Edward. That’s not always realistic. People can love more than one person in their lifetime. |