Loved it!

CUTE!

Well, this was a cute read. ) I love the image of Sora and that guitar, for some reason. Ha, put him in his final form clothes, add the silver guitar floating at his back...man I wish that was a secret weapon in the game, now. xD

Little curious about the fact that Riku's having no trouble whatsoever getting over a cocaine addiction. From what I hear, drug withdrawals can be pretty damn nasty. Ah well, for the sake of keeping some reality in my head, I'll pretend they worked through that after the story leaves off, lol. So I'll just say yay for cute endings and for Riku and Sora being together and happy fluff times all around.

Hi, just wanted to let ya kno that i read your story, the entire thing! And i wanted to compliment your plot development, the story didn't wow me or anything- but it was enough to give me a good read

Not to mention to did good with the Sora and Riku in love part n_n

See? I finished it and it was AWESOME. lol

More of a conflict would have been okay, but that's just the part of me that loves angsty stuff talking. This was really sweet and all around a well written fic.

-thumbs up- Good job.

I absolutely LOVE you for writing this! Bwahaha, poor Demy. Aren't those strings a bitch? Glad it's never happened to me!

Okay, I swear to God I'll finish reading this tomorrow. I would finish it now but it's nearly midnight and I definitely have finals tomorrow...

That story made me laugh so hard. Bear Seaman? That whole part was so funny :D... you did a pretty good job. If I were to rate this story on a scale of one to ten, I'd give it a 7 :) that's good.

I love this story... Some hints to make it even better, though, is to use more synonyms and details. An example: there are a lot of ways to say "kiss." There's lip-lock/locking lips, pressing lips together, connecting lips, closing the space between your lips, and many other things (you could also say things other than lips.) There are also a variety of words which mean "dick" or "pelvis," like penis, cock, length, shaft, member, or sometimes erection or hard-on. For more synonyms, you can use a thesaurus. As for detail, you could use more adjectives as well as descriptions of feelings. You should especially use detail in sex scenes (read other sex scenes if that helps with vocab., inspiration and such) Just so you know, I am NOT calling this story bad in any way shape or form. Over all, the storyline and such are really interesting! Bravo on a brilliant story! :D

Hawt...

Aw... I love it!

Okay, so I LOVE this story, tis amazing. :) But I found one thing with this chapter that really grossed me out. xD The fact that Riku had just given head to some random cocaine dealer less then an hour earlier, and Sora was totally ok with kissing him. If I was ever in Sora's position, I'd be like "Get your addict ass in the bathroom, and brush your fucking teeth. Then, I'll kiss you." xD

kya! KAWAII! Oh, I love fluff... And the dancing was hawt, too! awesome chap! :D

I love it :3

This story is amazing :D

awesome chapter, I love it! :3 Especially sora telling kairi she turned him gay XD