Reviews for Wild Child
creamjam chapter 63 . 5/3
What a fantastic piece of work. I am so glad I found it. It has to be one of the best, if not the best story I have ever read. Thank you.
Girl On Fire 111 chapter 63 . 10/12/2019
Hey, so sorry I haven’t reviewed this chapter yet, so I’m going to do it now. I absolutely loved this chapter, I am so glad Pippin got to see his family again after so meny years,although I can’t believe he has turned into a wolf for the last time! Poor Allie, I almost cried reading this scene. I liked your idea with the fire and it’s good Allie saved that little kid, it makes sence, she’s always putting others life before others, that’s one of the meny things I love about her character. I’m so excited for chapter 64! I can’t wait to read it! I’m especially looking forward to some more Frodo/Allie scenes . Keep up the awesome work! Your doing an amazing job at writing such a brilliant story with all the characters in character and every chapter just as interesting and exciting as the last!
Aria Breuer chapter 63 . 4/18/2019
Well, that was an unexpected twist, but then you do that a lot! :) Still, poor Pippin! And I'm glad that Frodo and Sam, in some way, have told Allie what was bothering Frodo. I still don't like how Sam and Allie treat Frodo like a child or someone that should be taken care of all the time. Frodo has to face this eventually. We know this! He can't just hide away his pain and let it get worse! That's not good for anyone!

Well done, by the way! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
PrettyRecklessLaura chapter 63 . 3/29/2019
Can't wait for more!
Daughter of the Oceans chapter 63 . 3/29/2019
Let it be said I officially cried buckets after this chapter, especially the ending.
I’m sobbing over Pippin’s fate but I’ve accepted it. I cannot wait for the next chapter, I know it’ll high quality as usual!
PrettyRecklessLaura chapter 62 . 2/21/2019
Can't wait for more!
Aria Breuer chapter 62 . 2/18/2019
Whoa! That was a really good chapter! I wondered when something would happen towards the end of the chapter, nearly expecting it to be another pleasant chapter. I guess Marroc is going to be a problem. I still cannot believe he's back! I hope Allie and Frodo resolve this issue soon enough. :)

Oh Allie, always thinking like an adult but your antics prove you are still a kid, a wild child, at heart. Although, I find I can relate to Frodo the most. I see myself in Frodo, even in this chapter, which is rather interesting to say the least. :) Frodo and Allie are definitely opposites, so at least they're getting along a lot more now. But I guess we already knew that by now. :) I wonder if Allie has caught on about Frodo and his Mount Doom incident. I wonder what her reaction will be. :)

I liked this chapter. I wonder when you'll update again. I can wait. I'll be patient. :) Just giving you words of encouragement, by the way. Well done. Very well done indeed. Cheers! :)

~ Aria Breuer
AghiTron chapter 62 . 2/18/2019
To parrot the famous words of many charcters in many media, "I've been looking forward to this." And im am looking forward to the next chapter too. You once again deserve my utmost praise for yet another great chapter. Keep up the good work, and take the time you need, though please do not forget the story, not that I believe I need to tell you that.
-Aghi
Daughter of the Oceans chapter 62 . 2/17/2019
I should have expected Lobelia to pull a nasty trick like that, you executed it splendidly! I’m looking forward to the next chapter, with her father back, who knows?
Girl on fire 111 chapter 61 . 2/9/2019
Hi, I absolutely love your story wild child! This is my second time reading it and I think it’s amazing! I love the character development and I think Frodo and Allie are perfect. There is honestly so much I would love to talk aboutand say, I carnt wait for the next chapter. It would be awesome to talk to you about the story. Once again thanks for writing such an amazing tale.
Girl on fire 111
Aria Breuer chapter 61 . 1/17/2019
Finally, I'm caught up with my reading for your fanfic! Yes! :)

I like how Marigold and Allie are on better terms. Yes, Frodo's suffering, but here's hoping that he will recover from his traumas. Reading about Bounder's Memorial made me think of the MMO video game "The Lord of the Rings Online". It makes me curious about whether you've played that video game? :) I've enjoyed LOTRO (Lord of the Rings Online) and hope to get back into playing it again. I miss it. *sighs*

I think what Sam said about Allie and Frodo is true concerning their love, but I also want to point out the thing about true love. It's a natural feeling. As much as we fight for the ones we love, we also have to let it come on its own. I'm sure you know this, but I don't mind letting others know about it, too. Having love be a natural thing is much easier than fighting as hard as we can and still having to fight for love. When love is natural, we have something worth fighting for. I think I get what Sam is saying in this chapter, too. I'm glad Marigold came to realize that. :) I guess I learned something, too. :)

Anyway, well done with this whole story so far. I look forward to more updates from you. :)
Aria Breuer chapter 60 . 1/16/2019
Almost caught up on reading your fanfic! One more chapter to go! :)

I'm so glad Allie wasn't too upset or mad to see Frodo and Marigold reunite. I just hope Frodo will be all right when he breaks the news to Marigold. And I do hope Marigold will be all right as well.

This was a relaxing chapter, I'll admit that much. Oh, I can't wait to see Lobelia's face when she learns the news that Frodo's back in the Shire! :) Well done. :)
Aria Breuer chapter 59 . 1/16/2019
I wonder why at the end of each part in this fanfic has to be sad? This one is more hopeful, but it's still rather sad.

As for my thoughts on this third part as a whole, this was definitely an emotional thrill ride. True, there were changes from the movies and the books in this fanfic, but it brought about a new version to the tale that helps explain another "what if" moment in the most powerful, epic way possible. It's true that I was between liking and becoming annoyed with Allie, and was right by her side when Frodo told her that they and the Company needed to run from Sauron. So, it's been back and forth with my thoughts on Allie.

To be honest, for this fanfic, Frodo here deserves Allie. In a way, this is so. It's been almost a year since I started reading this fanfic, so it's been quite a journey for me. You really proved that Frodo and an OFC (Original Female Character) can truly belong together. This gives me hope for the OCs and may even help with my own stories.

This is also the longest review I have written in a long while, so I'm grateful for that. It means that I can still write long reviews. Brilliant job as always. I've got to try out writing longer chapters. My chapters are short right now, but I guess that's all right. I just want to improve, too, and your story is helping with that. :) Well done. Very well done indeed. I'm almost caught up with reading your fanfic. Only two more chapters until I'm caught up, unless you update of course. We'll see what happens. :)
Aria Breuer chapter 58 . 1/15/2019
A relaxing chapter, but the letter teared me up. Hopefully, Frodo can find a way to save Allie and Pippin. And, before I forget again, I'm glad Gimli called Frodo a young hobbit. In a way, it evened the odds.

I still think Frodo is the true hero, even in this story, even if he doesn't admit it to himself. Ultimately, he was the one who succeeded in destroying the Ring. And I know what was written in here that Allie and Frodo lost their innocence. If there was a way they could regain some of that innocence back, learn to enjoy life again, that would be great. It doesn't have to be losing innocence and that's it. Sometimes we bounce back. :)

Well done. :) I'm getting caught up here on my reading your fanfic. :)
Aria Breuer chapter 57 . 1/15/2019
It's gone! The Ring is gone! Finally! That was awful, the way Sauron nearly binded Frodo to the Ring and Gollum, too. I feared the worst, but that's over now. Now, I just hope Allie is all right. Well done. :) Frodo must be so changed after all that he went through. :(
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