| Reviews for Whirlpool's Rebirth |
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   MojoBlack chapter 8 . 9/10 Very unique NaruHina story. I like it |
| thegrison chapter 9 . 8/24 Ok a few things you need to fix. Danzo stolen Shisui Uchiha's Sharingan eye is what cast that genjutsu on Naruto right? If yes then he HAS to have eye to eye line of sight. That means the bandages block it have to be removed. If he did remove or even adjust the bandages then the others would have saw & stopped it. Karin would have felt the genjutsu being cast. All Sharingan genjutsu require that. Itachi is a genjutsu master he can cast other genjutsu then just Sharingan genjutsu. |
| thegrison chapter 7 . 2/19 You do know that "muscle memory" is NOT muscle training but it is mental. It is the brain knowing what to do by doing it over and over other words your brain learns what signals to send by practicing. So the shadow clones can help with that. Only physical things like strength training are a no go for clones. |
| Enforcer209 chapter 13 . 12/30/2019 Well that was an alright story |
| Miwal cadarn Juubi Dovahkiin chapter 8 . 12/28/2019 Naruto should kick Kiba's ass for cockblocking him and hinata-chan |
| yahska chapter 2 . 11/16/2019 there is a difference between bowl and bowel |
| Brandon Boodoo chapter 13 . 9/8/2019 I wanted soooo much to rage and flame you for chapter 12. I also wanted to quit this story before reaching chapter 9... as much as I tried to do these things, this story just brought me back to finish reading it. My friend this was one of the best stories I had the privilege to read on this website. - - Thank you! |
| Monster King chapter 13 . 7/21/2019 Great job |
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/30/2019 Well DONE |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2019 Type your review here.I rather kill myself than follow an idiot. kage like naruto useless |
| Kingkong101 chapter 11 . 11/13/2018 So lame |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/20/2018 Booo you suck |
| kyoanna chapter 13 . 9/23/2017 thank you for pointing out the reason that so many Canon Naruto jutsu are practically useless. It's all powerful... if you actually hit something, which they never seem to do. As someone who actually knows how to fightI've taken judo and taekwondo since I could walk) I can honestly say that 90% of Ninja need to go back to the academy before they hurt themselves. My ranting on how Kishimoto desperately needs to consult someone who knows some kind of martial arts aside, this is a pretty good fic. you often got the spelling of names mixed up and Naruto's power level was kinda inconsistent. on the other hand you did not vastly overpower the characters to the point of disbelief and the relationship was well paced and believable. good job |
| my 2 guys chapter 13 . 4/3/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 13 . 4/3/2017 that is the chapters coming |
