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Well let me start off by saying that I am a lesbian. However, I have learned the male anatomy thoroughly. Ok, johnfox let me tell you, if this seems unrealistic then darling, you need to learn to breathe, relax and try out a few things. Obviously vanilla is the only flavor you have tried and it wouldn't hurt to sample others! Spend more time with some personal introspection than judging another's preferences. For all we know, and the subconscious thought I picked up from this story, we might only live once and we should live it up!

I enjoyed reading this immensely. I liked the use of the artistic license on the asari physiology. In the game there is a statement somewhere that she makes saying that "l am nearly a thousand years old"

I know you want constructive remarks, but honestly I only have one thing to say : piece of porn sh*t, and by sh*t I mean digusting and really non-realistic, even if apparently you can spell, use grammar and make coherent paragraphs quite well.
I don't know if I must laugh at it or just cry, good for you if you find it "fun" to write, definitively not my fun to read.

Awesome, everything was just awesome. Also I always figured Samara wanted it rough.

That was awesome. I can totally see samara liking it rough too. That was a great story.

please continue this maybe even have samara getting pregnant.

Hooray for Sam taking it up the ass!

Not too many anal fanatics here so kudos to you, sir.

Wowza wild!

Well it seems very out of character for Samara of all people to let loose like that, but she acted restrained due to her oath. Now that her missions were done I guess she could let loose some built up energy. I nomally don't let lemons get a higher score than 5, but this deserves a 10 out of 10. Hope you continue doing a good job.

love it!

Would really love to see a continuation

This is a great story. Very Well Written, the pacing, the words, the descriptions, the tone, The author did a Outstanding job on it all. Excellent.

If I can someday pull off writing something this GREAT, I'd be so happy. I strive to push myself to be the best and better.

I don't how long the author has been writing, or how long the story took to finish, but an outstanding job of writing all of it.

Pacing, Setting, Mood, Word Play, the same words and descriptions were hardly used, the author mixed it up and it helped the story flow and not feel repetitive. The tone, energy raw, roughness, emotion, and passion was conveyed expertly.

Also the author did a Fantastic Job on the character of Samara.

The story was delivered fantastically

The tone and set up was fantastic

The pace, the climax, the end, It was all done with excellent writing, and the whole thing was executed so great.

10 out of 10.

Thanks for a great read, it's truly inspiring to me, and will have an impact that influences me to strive for this sort of writing.

Gears

I believe the saying is erotic is using a finger kinky uses the whole elcor. Prompt Samara runs out of soap so she uses old spice swagger with a odd effect on a certain crew member

how you managed to write an incredibly kinky smut piece that's fluffy at the end I don't know. It's very good though.

Some of the best I have ever read.

I will look forward to what you writ next.

I'm not sure if this a mistake, but Samara age is estimated 600 human years or at least that's what the ME2 page says anyway.

dude i love it and do you think if you feel in da mood could you write more samara make shepard fics? there seems to be a surprising lack of them. but seriously due i freaken love it