Different and nicely written :)

BB

great story!

:D

This was really interesting, I liked it. It would be really cool if Olivia met Peter as kids one day even for a short amount of time. They are so connected, i wouldn't be shocked if they actually did meet once as kids.

When I saw the promo for this week's ep, Oh, how I thought of you. And this story. I'd forgotten you hadn't finished it.

But you finished it perfectly. Capturing the haunted expressions on both of them, and yet, a moment of light and hope is there at the end. Something they could and still do find in each other.

I'm very curious to see how "kiddie Liv and Peter" meet in canon, although this version will always be special.

Wow, that was brilliant.

You really captured Peter and Olivia's characters well in this and I loved that it was a meeting in front of a Rube Goldberg machine.

Great job.