| Reviews for Mamma, Mommy, Leonardo |
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FujoMaster chapter 4 . 8/2/2017 it so cute... please make a sequel for this story... |
Natasha Winters chapter 4 . 3/26/2017 *quietly and patiently hopes for more* |
Dsssda chapter 1 . 11/28/2016 This is so cute I absolutely love this |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2016 Mama Leo, I love it! |
Bitten Nails chapter 4 . 12/25/2015 This is so cute! |
A l l a s t o r chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 Buon pomeriggio mia amica. (: First, I'd like to say that I'm throughly enjoying your story. I love the way you've characterized both Ezio and Leonardo, their voices just speak to me, it's great. There's only one thing I'd like to add since it seems you went all out to make this story excellent: a correction or two to your Italian. -"Mi dispiace" is the correct spelling of "I'm sorry", "dispache" would be said "dis-pa-kay." -"Assassini" is the plural of "assassino." Masculine words like "assassino" change their endings to "i" when they become plural. -"Grazie" is the correct spelling of "thank you." I didn't see any other errors that I recall in this chapter, but they're relatively minor. If you like, I could check the other chapters for you and leave any corrections in my review, but I won't do that beyond this one unless you ask me to. (: Buona giornata a tu! |
PyqaFanGirl chapter 4 . 5/19/2014 OH MY GOD! . .FIC. . .IN. .YEARS! YOU NED TO WRITE LIKE A SECOND PART FOR THIS! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *THROWS A TRUCK LOAD OF HEARTS AT YOU* |
Boyslove4ever chapter 4 . 4/5/2014 Please don't leave a cliffhanger like that I need another chapter this story is really good |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013 awesome! |
Lovestar and Silverice chapter 4 . 8/20/2013 Silver: im hopeing its not the end |
Berry-Berry chapter 4 . 6/9/2013 I have to agree with the other reviewers; please please please update this story! Leaving us on a cliffhanger right there was a torturous note to stop on! I love your Leo & Ezio - they're both so magnifico! Leo's soft, caring side to Ezio's masculine, intense one. .GOOD! |
dragon of colors chapter 4 . 5/16/2013 I enjoyed this so much, is there going to be more? Please say yes please say yes. But if not that is alright as well. Mamma Leo is the best Leo ;) |
MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 4 . 4/18/2013 Oh my good Jesús. I just can't gahhhhhhhhh! This is amazing! I doubt you'll update this again because it has been a while but if you ever decide to I'll be waiting right here. This story makes me melt into piles of fangirl goo. Urghhhhhhy Ezio and Leo being called Mamma and Papa by the young assassinos is like an amazing dream for me. I can't help squealing. A lot. |
The Crystal Pen chapter 4 . 3/9/2013 Noooo! You must continue this! It's so cute. |
HidanKakuzuFanGirl chapter 4 . 2/8/2013 more please |