That was adorable. Just plain adorable. I loved it, and I can't find anything ti critique. :)

Ah, the famous Edward Elric...

Roy falling head over heels for the little devil...

This story made Ed seem... impishly cute...

Does that make sense?

Anyway, nice story-the jokes were classic.

I really love this fic! W You are an awesome writer!

Now I'm really curious about who tops who now, will Ed really be able to top Roy? More please!

Oh... Oh my god.

Even if this is implied that Ed tops Mustang (which I just can't see), I loved this! The blatant flirting, the intense infatuation, it's all so deliciously canon. And Ed's cockyness combined with Roy's desire - it's just so perfect!

Also, the nickname Sparky made me giggle maniacally.

I'm hooked! So well written (a pleasure in itself), on top of that clever and witty! I am so looking forward to seeing where you take this (and who will be riding whom)!

Oh definitely lovely. Im more a Roy-fan but I wouldnt hesitate to turn into a fan of THIS Ed. Loved the stable metaphor by the way. Bye

love this! Where have you been my entire life? I love this! Your writing style is wonderful and unique and well edited. Lovely lovely lovely. Sorry I know I'm repeating myself... anyway off to read your other stuff.

Ahaha i liked the banter that wend between ed and roy. Very amusingXP

Uh... I suppose it's following Brotherhood... 2003? Not sure now _

But heya, finally! A great oneshot regarding the name Mustang (really, Ed, that was a nice one xD) Love it, short and simple and to the point... thumbs up for Olivier there :D

Great story. I like that mature version of Ed. And that shy up-in-the-clouds Roy also kicked ass :D