| Reviews for In the Shadows |
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Guest chapter 17 . 7/27 This was the worse outcome and I did not expect the story to make that turn but it unfortunately did. I usually don’t cry when watching movies and reading books but this had me bawling. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21 Next time on vegeta, the next Sherlock Holmes |
That'sSomeAvatarSmackTalk chapter 17 . 6/14 This was an amazing ride and I’m so happy I found it what an ending, it kills me not to know what happens after but at the same time it makes it all the more immersive |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/1 Wtf?! What happened after omggggg! Hands down the best fan fiction I’ve ever read. But is this the end? Cuz I’m left with so many questions like what happened to bra and did the ghost finally stop it what? |
Electramithos chapter 1 . 5/29 OMG, you don't finish? I want a final, a happy end, pleaseeee! This fic was so amazing, in so many ways...We deserve a ending. Please, come back and finish this. |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/23 Man it's a shame that this story hasn't been finished. I been reading it for hours today. |
BV4ever chapter 17 . 4/20 OMG! This story is so intense! It’s full of suspense, gruesome gut wrenching angst! A real thriller! I’m so overwhelmed at this moment! This last chapter had me crying like a baby! The suffering that Vegeta and his family has endured from the dark avengers was paralyzing. Their malicious vengeance to strike the Prince 20 years later was well thought out and calculating. Using his family is the only thing that will unhinge the Saiyan. I’m so proud of Bulma! She’s his ride or die chick in this story! Their love knows no bounds! It saddens me that his only option to save his family is to lose them. His decision to commit suicide to appease the dark avengers shows his growth. He has become a selfless, attentive and loving father/husband. His family adores him and loves him unconditionally. He has gained respect and admiration and formed lasting friendships with Goku and his sons. I’m hopeful that this suicide attempt will somehow grant him access to where Bra is. Maybe this was all a test to see if he has truly change?Yes...he was a merciless sadistic monster. But let’s not forget he was groomed by a bigger merciless sadistic monster at a very young age. Why can’t they see he destroyed their civilization like Frieza destroyed his? He was under direct orders from Frieza. I’m not excusing his crimes but I understand them. Survive by any means necessary. Sometimes you have to become a monster to keep the bigger monster at bay. Kami...he deserves another chance! Even the cruelest Prince of All Saiyans have a soul that need forgiveness! *sniffles and sighing* Btw...My heart is breaking more now that I realize that it’s been years since your last update! I hope you will find the inspiration someday to complete this. In the meantime, please stay safe and healthy! ;) |
Kaori-Mikaren chapter 17 . 3/16 hola por favor actualiza que pasó con Vegueta por favor debes continuar |
Astro1505 chapter 17 . 3/10 I don't think I've read such a consuming story in a long, long while! Such an utterly brilliant piece of writing. I love the portrayal of Vegeta, even in your other stories. I don't know if this is the last chapter and the story is finished but if it is, what a cliffhanger! You truly left me wanting more! I hope it's not finished yet and you decide to update because this is honestly one of my favorite works on FanFiction and I'd love to read some more of it. You really are an extremely talented author. |
LuckyGirl9 chapter 17 . 2/1 It is such an impressive story, that it would compete with the dramas of Stephen King, you write very well, I loved the drama, the scares, the supernatural, and the very well written characters, I hope you finish the story, it is a jewel of the fanfics. |
Efri14 chapter 17 . 12/13/2019 I hate sad ending!What happened to vegeta and bra then? |
Guest chapter 17 . 11/10/2019 Holy shhhhhhhiiiiiiitttttttt hands down I %10000 love this story! Your a freaking great writer! Shit I couldn’t stop reading this store! Amazing just freaking amazing story line! |
chiarairis.dannunz chapter 17 . 11/10/2019 Really, I am amazed by your great talent... I don't know if at the final scene I cried because of its content or because the fic is on hiatus. |
Seraphim95 chapter 17 . 9/10/2019 Amazing writing and story. I've been obsessed the moment I started reading. That being said, this feels very unfinished. You left a lot open. Did Yuno see the error in his ways and evil of the spirts he corrupted? Did he destroy his realm right as Vegeta killed himself? If so, does Bra see him and tell Bulma once she is back on Earth ? Why would you introduce that she was a "practitioner" if it wasn't going to eventually lead to that? I just feel cheated that he destroyed himself... again. And then nothing. Don't get me wrong you had me in tears when he finally told Bulma he loved her after all those years. I really wish you would do at least one more chapter just to answer the questions I'm sure everyone is asking. |
MrsVegeta28 chapter 17 . 7/15/2019 Omg. I need an ending to this! There’s got to be a way. Amazing writing btw. |