Awesome but i really want more

I liked the whole thing until kitty arrived no offense

Name: Jessie Empiredon't
Age: 12
Look like: She have blonde hair cut short with soft brown eyes.
Personality: Good kid, hyperactivity and always smile.
Background: Jessie like to wear sweater, skirt and mary-jane shoes with sock. She have a twin and little brother, name Jason and her little brother name Alexander. Jessie is cousin Freddie.

Relationship to main characters or what they think of them.

Of

Freddie: He think that Jessie is the weird kid. But really sweet.
Carly: She think that Jessie just annoying kid make her angry.
Sam: She think that Jessie is weird kid but she really like that Jessie cookie.
Gibby: Really don't care about Jessie because he think that Jessie is weird.
Spencer: He think Jessie is the cool kid. But at the same he think that Jessie really the weird one.
Jake: He think Jessie is interesting kid.
Griffen: He don't really like Jessie because Jessie always ask him about kiss.
Shane: He think Jessie just little girl that din know anything about world. But she know Jessie is a genius girl.

Please update more! By the way please use my character.

Hei senpai sorry for late review oke? I like your fic is very cool and cute...so many seme and one uke that make me crazy for yaoi.

I lik this fic...so...You must up date latter oke!?

How ever Freddie is uke and how the really seme? I want to no latter oke?

Love fic.
Snow

Freddie should choose Griffin

I think the guy you're thinking of with the jacket is Rip-Off Rodney, but I'm not sure.

This is really good! Please keep writing it! XD i love Kitty (no homo) her charactor is amazing!

i like it so far but you need to work on your grammar a little it makes the story a little confusing but other than that it is good so far.

OMG so good! just love this! Love kitty and her yaoi side lol... poor Freddie!

please update

Oh god I love it don't ever stop this story I want tolearn more about Mr. Hawke so hot.

For the love of god, learn to spell & write correctly! There's an invention called spell check!

Omg funny I think I like Griffion and maybe have...Sam talk to the boys? Than maybe have kitty replace all of his cloths with girls cloths

I hope you update soon this seems like an awesome fanfic. For the school girl thing go sleuth a bet that always works and maybe have Sam or a same kitty sit down with "the boys" and talk to than about what they want. Also there is nothing wrong with having "the boys" sexing eachother up

SWEET ! I LOVE THIS !