Uh...i was very confused on the story, a guy steals Woody for no reason and then breaks Andy's window..and runs off the crime scene..ending was SUPER CONFUSING too..like, there was no backstory on why this guy stealed Woody or decided to do that in the first place.. :/

I'm kind of confused. I mean, the f-bombs weren't necessary. The whole story was kind of weird and unexplained. I wanted to stop reading halfway through. And also, it was a dumb prank. They wouldn't send two cops, turn it into a "crime scene", question Andy, or run prints for a prank. They'd maybe run the plate, apprehend the guy, hold him overnight, maybe, and he'd pay for the window. And that's suggesting they didn't have better things to do. I'm sorry, I mean it's well written, it's a good idea, but it's just a bit confusing.

Honestly this is well written but it's also boring. Sorry, I just expected more. I mean, you could summarize this story in one word: Bandalism. Why did this Dylan do that? The story doesn't explain. And why did he only take Woody? And... just... ok this happened, so what? Like, nothing happened. I don't know...

ooo I like the use of suspense here. This story is very orignial and refreshing in its perspective. Although there is strong language here, this is very believable. Awesome work, ncc2011! I hope I hear more from you!

this is good