It is sad to see this hasn't been updated un a while.l, but I enjoyed reading it. London is interesting to read about and I can't wait for her mystery to be revealed fully. One thing I was having a bit of an issue though was, when reading, you would switch POV every new paragraph you made when more than one non-baby was in the same place. Maybe putting a little symbol in between each POV, or even just continuing to use one POV for each ongoing scene would work out a bit more. If not, then I have gotten used to it, but I think it will flow better instead of writing readers having to guess which person is speaking from the way they think/what names we see the person in the POV we are in uses and guess those are not the POV.
Anyway, keep up the great works and I hope to see more in the future.

Glad to see you back and great chapter!

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

Please update!

So shit and forced.

This one was short, but since it came fast after the other one, I won't complain. While I am enjoying the leisurely pace, I can't stop wonering when we'll get to see some action.

I wouldn't call it long, though it's not short. I like longish chapters, anyway. I can't wait for them to stay alone.

Is she gonna find out that henry is kinda her son

I suppose the closer you are to someone, the harder it is to imagine that person acting in a surprising way, even if it's only surprising to us. One gets so used to 'seeing' them in one narrow way, we stop notiving they have the ability to act differently in different situations.

I'm glad you're posting again. :)

I'm curious to see where this story will take the characters. I much preferred that the PoV doesn't change as abruptly from paragraph to paragraph: it's much easier to read.

Although I did like the chapter, it gets confusing when the PoV changes without warning. Sometimes I look at an 'I' and I have no idea if it's London, Creed or Logan.

About time she started to step her foot down, though I would rather she had told him he had to choose priorities: his breakfast first but with a crying baby, or baby's breakfast first and then his. And by the way, someone should give him a hint about what to be a 'father' also entails.

Well, you asked about their interaction so... Ypu haven't given away much about his feelings, but this last chapter makes me think he may be curious about her. In the very least curious about how she feels to touch.

Since you asked... I have no problems with longer paragraphs. But then again, Jane Austen's and her contemporaries' paragraphs were way longer and they never struck me as too long either.

I am enjoying the story so far, though it seems to me London should be trying to convince Creed they'll need to pass off as married and, so far, there's been no vibe as much as hinting towards it, in the eyes of any onlooker. He does want the cover to stick, doesn't he?

I like this explanation. Even though the Professor I have come to know over the years would not aprove of such 'baby creation', the fact that you stated this is aside from comics kind of helps getting over my ingrained image of him. Funny tht I find it easy to accept the different incarnations of Creed and Logan from Universe to Universe. Anyway, the chess board was set, now the pieces have to make their way through the game.