Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

Genial d

Wo that was a very good story! :)

The ending was pretty surprising because I just waited for something bad to happen and then it was just happy and I loved it
thanks for writing this

lisbon is cute

OH THIS CHAPTER PULLS AT THE STRINGS EVERYTIME.

I'm not a big AU fan but I gave your storie a try and I loved it! Wish there was a way in the show she could be alive! Great job!

Cheers, AJ James

That was great. I'm glad that everything turned out so great. I can't believe that Charlotte actually hypnotized Bertram. Man if Jane ever found out Charlotte would be in huge trouble. The name that you gave the baby is beautiful, and he sounds so cute. I think that it would be great if you could do a sequel to this story that deals with Charlie and everyone in some way. Think about it if you haven't already considered the idea.

That was great. Yay for Jane. Figures that Lela would have some trouble believing what Jane told her. Especially with everything that has happened to her in Foster Care. I can't wait to see what happens next.

That was great. That was really nice of Lisbon to call Charlotte's friends. Tehy seemed to respond calmly about her having a father, at least I think they did. I guess I will find out in the next chapter. I'm actually a little sad that the next chapter is the last chapter. Lisbon is right though, Charlotte isn't afraid of anything. I bet she didn't even get a call from Grace in the first place.

That was great. It was a complete turn of events when Darcy showed up and tried to save Lisbon and Charlotte. It was surprising that she was there to get her own revenge, but then again she was a mother. Red John truly is a psychopath, he can't even feel love, and killing Darcy there in cold blood proves it. I hope that it was Red John that was shot.

That was great. A little surprising that Lisbon was the one that couldn't keep her mouth shut. I thought that it would have been Charlotte. Smart move by Jane sending Rigsby, Cho, and Grace in the opposite direction. At least now they can't interfere or get hurt.

That was great. Wow Red John is really Robert McGregor. That was a complete surprise. I would have never thought of him as being Red John.

That was great. It seems like Red John some how tampered with the drug that he first gave Charlotte when she was five. With the speed that the other car was driving, I hope that Jane wasn't hurt too badly. I hope that he can still go after Red John and finally kill him.

That was great. I'm glad that Charlotte was ablet convince Jane to wait. I like how the effects of the drug that Red John loves to brag about using are starting to loose their effect on Charlotte. I wouldn't have thought it possible, but maybe it is.