AW this story is so...so...it's ya know...it's omigod i'm on the verge of tears i'm usually a momo basher (depends on the story) But this makes me want to change my whole perspective it makes me want to cry! I love it i can't wait to read the next one! please update!

you really had to make momo die?

'WILL YOU MARRY ME-'

*PUNCH*

:'D *Anticipates*

Alrighty, congratufreakinglations on 104 reviews... Lucky duck.

~BbtM

Sorry for the late review.

Ugh, dreaded this one. But it was less gruesome as I had imagined it, I suppose.

~BbtM

he propose...yehey he did propose and in such a very awkward timing when karin had to pee.. LOL..

great chap...

Mmm. This is definitely the kind of story I like to read. Too bad I suck at writing, or else I would've had a whole lot of stories, just like this one.

The introductory paragraph was interestingly set out. It's different from the rest of the book, and it's kind of fitting, with the kind of mentality that Karin and Toshiro are feeling right now, the writing definitely compliments that. Very nicely done. The fact that Toshiro is having nightmares about Momo is also very real, so good job on that.

The humour at the start of the second set of dialogue is good. Stories with characters that connect like this, need this kind of humour. Especially the way Karin reacts to what Toshiro says, because it feels much more realistic, and more to the personality that you portray.

Haha, the proposal really is kind of corny. Props to Toshiro for proposing without a long speech. I doubt he really has had practice proposing to people, so again, it feels corny, but real.

And, though you already said it, be careful of your storyline. You don't want it to slip out of what you imagined it to be at the start :D

Keep it up!

I think this is a pretty good story :)

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I like it.

Its NOT crappy, its KEWL!

Im will wait patiently for the next chapter.

Cittyno2

Agh, how cheesy.

But I suppose Hitsugaya has never seen someone propose, else he might've done better. Cute scene, though. I was giggling. xD

!11 romance! and real life-oh-my-gawd-this-is-awkward-romance!

Oh wow! My heart was hurting when momo made that trade.. it was pure sacrifice out of friendshp n love.

*sighs* poor momo.

And poor karin.

Pls continue.

T-T

Hinamori's death...I'm actually starting to like her now...

Continue, continue!

TTTT p-p-p-p-please update again soon

i hope this all comes togethor soon. i like some angst but it needs a plot and i am having trouble seeing where this is going. really nice descriptions. i never thought that momo could be this good at angst!