this is amazing. please continue

Please tell me this is being continued! It's brilliant! It honestly sounds like it could be an episode or a comic. Keep up the good work!

Please update soon! Can't leave us hanging here, it's already been over two years since the last update. This is cruel and unusual (and I think undeserved) punishment!

I love this so far! It's super interesting!

This is great! You're an excellent writer, and this story has kept me in suspense the whole way through! I look forward to reading the next chapter!

wow! I love this! Question KF and Rob are just bros/friends right? Maybe I'm reading too much into it i don't know. Well PLEASE update SOON!

This is a fabulous Story!

All your fighting scenes, they're easy to read and run so "smooth".

Very well written and I can't wait for your next update!

really good i almost didnt read because i thought it might be childish due to the tarantula in the title but really good so you might want to try something else for the title

LOL

I assume the book that Amir was reading was the Amulet of Samarkand in the Bartimaes Trilogy!

BRO! PLEASE, JUST DON'T KILL AKIM! OO U scare me. TT

Kay, why is Akim such a likeable character? Does 'crumpled body' mean he's dead? I don't want him to be such a transient OC :(

Also, KF better have some stuff to say; I look forward to the interaction between him and Robin.

Thanks for the update!

YOU UPDATED! Thanks!

Yipee! You updated! I hope you update again soon.

Epic story line! This is really good. I cannot wait for more.

I'm assuming something huge and terrible happened in your life? Are you still updating? Anyway hope nothing bad has happened and you won't give up the story. cheers.