... GGAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY! OK no :P

(My face after read this) 0_0!

good story, with a strange twist.

Never put up a review to this so here goes.

Glad to see that this is under revision, the ideas here make for a great story, although the pace just doesn't do it as much justice as it should. There's a lot of potential here and you could get really in depth as to what crazy emotions drove them all to get to this lustful daze, what wasn't going right with three relationships and possibly even a few more / drawn out kinky details. (just a suggestion)

Anyways I'll be waiting for the re-write. Happy writing!

*scratches head*

Hey man, I'm sorry to, I shouldn't had said those things and I apologize for everything. I have nothing against gays, I really don't, it's just that spyro was a big part of my childhood and I snapped when I saw how many people did that to him. Honestly I read the stories and think they were pretty good. I just don't like it when people mess with my childhood. All my childhood was surrounded by parents bickering and fighting, sister causing trouble everyday. Spyro helped me cope and forget that part of my life. And to this day, he still helps me by inspiring me and giving me ideas. I'm so sorry if I hurt your feelings Nd pride in your stories. Also, sorry I could not pm you about this, you still have me blocked.

The only suggestion I have for you is...make the sex scene between Cynder and Ember longer; have them kiss and screwing each other.

omg wtf ?

Enjoyed the first part
The second part made for an interesting twist

Cute story dude. I never thought flame was spyros type but I guess I was wrong...haha.

That was awesome I got such a boner from that shit

Man, I loved it!
You knew very well describe each part, and with that, I could visualize the story in my mind. I confess I was excited in the part of Spyro and Flame. I'll give 5 stars to this fanfic! Continue with Spyro and Flame especially, because I want to read more of your fanfics about them.

not bad

I liked this story somewhat. A little on the fast side. You could have panned it out more by simply displaying their thoughts, feelings, simply adding details using the five senses. Also your vocabulary needs a little expansion. But I liked it so far. Sequel ? I would love to see what you would do with the guardians.

awsome! it was great so i thank you. hope you make more like this in the future.;P