JAHSKSHSJSHSJSDHJSHSJ FANE CAN FINALLY GET DICKED DOWN BY KUROGANE AKHSSJHSSJ

I LOVE XIAO LANG! AND THAT ENDING AJDHSJHDSJ

Haha so tideflower is just short

I'm not sure what I truly think about the ending with the guy who is most likely Fane, but this was pretty good. I honestly think that after everything the 2 of them have been through though, they atleast deserve happiness

I was honestly hoping that Fai and Yuui would steal something from them, but this works too

But..But if Fane had come through Fai wouldn't have died would he? Or was Fane really Yui?

wah~ Fane is scary

Fai doesn't want to share about his twin...poor guy

cool, it feels like a real chapter from the manga

Omg I loved this story so much - wasn't really expecting something so deep, but your summary caught my eye and had me thinking, hmmm. What would the characters turn out like? I was actually almost sure you'd insert both Yuui and Fai into Fane's world, to explain the twins.. But that would just have been another can of worms.
Loved the descriptions! Especially of the buildings and landscapes. What really struck me was how you did Fane's world, as well as the Beast's - both are very reflective of their personalities. Fane's world is like him - all pretty on the surface and not so pretty deep down.. Skeletons in the closet much? ;) it's like this picture of perfection and I loved Fane's backstory and his abilities with the mirrors.
Getting carried away. I loved how you had the Beast's world reflect his appearance -all black and red and angry like a volcano. Especially love the twist on his curse, and how the TRC!Kuro thought that curse was bad lol.
Both Fane and the Beast's stories left me hanging, and I'm glad that they sort of got together in the end, even though I'm not sure how effective Fane's enchantment will be, considering he failed with the immortality thing. That did provide some closure though.
Loved how you characterized everyone and wove the layers of stories and plans together, and I appreciated Fai getting to see his other self :P
Than you for the great read!

This is amazing!
The plot was juicy and well written.
The way you described everything in detail and the twists!
I'm extremely surprise by the last chapter. Fane escaped the mirror realm and Beast Kurogane got cursed yet again. Damn this story had me on the edge of my seat.

I can't believe I only noticed this now! In the first paragraph, you mentioned a world where the characters were transformed into children. Did this really happen or is it just something you inserted? It's been a while since I've watched the anime but I'm pretty sure it never happened in the manga... If you got the idea from a different story, I don't suppose you'd mind linking me to the mentioned story, would you? :))))))))

What a very satisfying ending to a rather amazing story. I don't think I've ever read a story with a plot such as this one. Praises to the author for coming up with such a fantastic idea.

I hope to be able to read your other Tsubasa stories soon. I pray that they live up to my expectations now more than ever :)

... What did he do to that apple? It seems like he cast a spell on it. I have 3 guesses:
1. Poisoned apple
2. The apple is normal and Fane is just tense
3. An apple with an age-reversing charm on it

Oh my goodness. Oh oh oh oh oh. As soon as I saw where this was going, I had to get up and walk around for a minute. Aha. I'm really glad that you wrote this last chapter and gave some closure to these two characters. I'm glad that Fane found someone else (and will eventually find even more people) although it's sad that that Kurogane would come out of one enchantment only to fall straight into another.

But wonderful. This is perfect. Bravo again on such a fabulous story. Thank you so much for taking it all the way to the end. :D