interesting read. funny!
good job, thank you

This story was wild from beginning to end. I was like oh no Cloud what are you dooiiinnggg. It was fun though. I enjoyed it.

F.Y.

This was absolutely adorable and I love it! Cloud’s bullheadedness in aiding his hero’s—even when Sephiroth doesn’t ask for it—is just so naive and innocent and ahhhhhh I’m drowning in feels! Of course, this probably generates problems in the long run, but it was excellent for a one shot!

I’ve decided to make a compilation of FFVII FFN fanfics that aren’t on AO3 to share with others, and I’d like to include this one. If you’d rather I not share this please tell me. If you’d like more information and or the link when I finally publish the list please inform me. Otherwise, thank you for making such a wonderful contribution to the FFVII fandom! I hope that sharing this with others will gain you more readers!

Yes, you missed some typos (there is one right in the last dialogue even), but it is still a brilliant story.
Just... why does it have only one single chapter? ;)

nice! the end was a bit short, but that could be because i just wanted to keep reading. :-)
love it!

that was fantastic!

This was in one word; absolutely amazing. You are inspiring, truly. I just love how you wrote Cloud and Sephiroth. Like Sephiroth especially seemed very in character, and Cloud was just adorable. I loved all the crazy tasks Sephiroth set him out to do (half the time I was wondering if he was screwing with him on purpose). But yeah, t'was truly a fabulous read. Thank you for sharing this with us, you're an amazing writer.

That was brilliant :D

Love It.

The second hand embarassment and "God please tell me you aren't going to" is just as real as the first time through and I'm dyin

oo so cute! XD Loved it~

Haha. This was so much fun to read. It's been a while since I've laughed so much at a story. The delightfully phrased sentances along, among my favourites is how being fat hadn't killed Heidegger and the long legs and hair leading to a very floppy Sephiroth. I'd love to read the continuation of this story if you ever plan to start posting again. Thank you for the work you've put down on this! I really enjoyed it.

The second hand embarassment and "God no baby what are yoU DOING STOP PLES" physically HURTS

This sooo needs a second part

Lololol, if it wasn't for the genre, I would have thought this was about a sephiroth who took to trolling a cadet and not a socially retarded way to spend time with someone.