Ahhh! A short but it is well written. I can literally feel Lewis' shock and surprise. And of course his slight grief although of course that isn't explored too much but if it was I think the fic wouldn't have been as beautiful if you will. The fact that it is this short actually suits it.

Anyways a marvelous job. I'm still waiting to read 'Unseen'...have you already read it?

Look forward to reading more oneshots from you