Reviews for Wolf Child |
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animerule64 chapter 1 . 5/30/2018 Add more chapters please |
Lw117149 chapter 1 . 3/15/2017 Sweet lol sequel? |
VIXX Dark Angel chapter 1 . 5/7/2015 Ah that was just to precious to bad love doesn't work out like that "sighs" |
horsesrules chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 write more its really good |
nieka1995901 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012 I liked it, its very good! Are you going to write more on it? I'll follow it just in case! |
black angel in love chapter 1 . 7/4/2012 cute! |
musme chapter 1 . 5/20/2012 I love it! |
mattcun chapter 1 . 10/9/2011 plz write more |
domsijohn chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 loved it |
angel61991 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011 awww ao cute! they make a good couple. |
Haunt of twilight chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 that was cute! there aren't enough of this pairing. |
Mika the Dark princess chapter 1 . 3/27/2011 Lov it |
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 1 . 3/25/2011 kool |
Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 -blushing smile and giggles- This was SO kawaii~! Love the pairings! Kouga/Harry, Draco/Kagome, Blaise/Ron (laughs), Sesshomaru/Hermione/Inuyasha (my mom and me were joking about this!), and Miroku/Sango? Assuming the last one, since it's Canon. Two things, though...how did Harry and Kagome meet? And are Harry's parents alive in this? You mentioned at the end that Harry should 'let his parents know first'. / |
Jesagon chapter 1 . 3/6/2011 This story does have the potential to be beautify, but for now it feels like a strange 5 minute summary of something far longer. The six year olds' reacts in ways they shouldn't, since Kouga is a demon I'll excuse him, but Harry? a somewhat normal human? If they had been a few years older perhaps. (pleas note that this is just opinions, and mine by the way.) As for the rest,add a little suspense, drag out the storyline a couple of chapters. If you ever feel like writing a multi chapter story out of this, where things don't progress this quickly - please inform me so that I may read it then. Good luck with your writing. |