This is great!

I absolutely love how you displayed her almost as a child oblivious to the natures of the world but mature enough to handle herself. And I adore the thought of her father smelling like bananas x)

fantastic!

I love the concept - the smell of bananas and their connection to her father. Your Jenny is pretty close to my vision of her so there was no struggle to wrap my head around. Some tightening on grammer and a close re-read would catch your missing words and make this an excellent story in my opinion.
A delightful and lighthearded tale; I look forward to reading more.

A fun little story. And I, too, have found bananas to be quite a-peeling. (Sorry, had to say that.) 10 out of 10 stars.

I thought it was really good - you really got into Jenny's way of thinking. You're right, she is childlike and innocent. Then again, she was only born in the episode 'The Doctor's Daughter', so she would be like a naive little kid. I really like what you did, writing a whole story about the joy she finds in discovering bananas. It was really sweet, :D

lol, great one-shot

this was really really cute! bananas are cool! i can just imagine the two of them buying bananas at that market.

This was adorable and wonderful and just fantastic! Such a fun lens through which to look at Jenny, and I think you really captured that SPIRIT of her so well!

This was a great story! I loved reading it; I love bananas, they're my favorite fruit. Bananas are also a big part of my story, so I found that kind of funny. Copy Cat. Haha, just kidding. But still, I loved your use of the sense of smell and the other senses. Great work!

That is just sweet. I can see Jenny staring up at a grove of bananas and smiling.