Reviews for A Cage of Blood and Circumstance
Little Buster chapter 5 . 2/28
Got to chapter 5 and like this story so far.
I hope Hinata will take Hanabi with her once she escapes from the village. That is the moment in this story I am most looking forward to. A BIG middle finger to that asshole hiashi. LoL
ForestShadow chapter 5 . 1/3
Thanks for the hard work love the story _
oneiricphilosoph chapter 5 . 8/21/2019
I really hope you continue this some day - it is very enjoyable, and I very rarely like anything resembling self-insert fiction, so this came as a very pleasant surprise. If you don't ever plan to finish this, though, I don't suppose you have done any other writing? I would love to check out any other works you've created. Judging from this one, I think that they'd be really good!
SAKIHUPASA15 chapter 5 . 7/2/2019
hey there are you still writing? hope you will continue this, i really enjoy reading cause this story and writing style is very specific with details and so it makes it really nice flow when you read. thnx :) It's ok if you are not going to continue.
475213 chapter 2 . 4/19/2019
The "training so hard and consistently that you want to train more" thing would explain SO MUCH about Gai and Lee!
respectjounin chapter 2 . 3/18/2019
This girl seems to be doing a lot of guesswork, and always taking it as fact. It’s kind of annoying how she assumes everything is a disadvantage to her or whatever and she is an expert in her opinion on what she will ALWAYS as forever be capable of doing and she perfectly knows how the system works. It just seems unrealistic to me that all of assumptions and guesswork done out of like 2 weeks of light research would be perfectly accurate and now she knows the requirements for how her whole life will go. She just came to the world not too long ago and to assume however much prior information she knows with the story is enough to decide all matters of how things will turn out and how things happen in this world seems presumptuous. She is NOT an expert, neither is what she’s saying or doing in “necessary preparation for the future” an exact science. It is fanfiction and anime knowledge, and either way Hinata turned out fine. So it is with reluctance that I move on in this story, with her “she knows all in order to succeed” mindset
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2019
A shame it's been abandoned. I wish the author would return to the story.

Most of the story is just an extended training montage with little plot, but somehow it still manages to be an interesting read.
Diamondfiend chapter 5 . 11/30/2018
This has been a really intriguing read with all the detail you go into, and although it saddens me to see that it seems to be abandoned, I wish you luck in any future writing endeavors. You obviously have an aptitude for it.
AdriLAAAxo chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
...7 years later. Dammit.
QueenRiddle chapter 5 . 10/18/2018
I wish people wouldn’t stop writing masterpieces in the making... that makes me very angry with the fanfiction world. Well, I hope you continue someday, even if it’s been 6 freaking years. Thank for this, anyway.
DeadParade chapter 5 . 10/10/2018
This is pretty good, i hope it's not abandoned.
Ahmed Maged chapter 3 . 10/4/2018
This is so fucking boring
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2018
This fic is really interresting. If you ever continue it (which would be awesome) I hope you ignore any canon reveals after the latest chapter and just pretend it's still 2012.
HorizonOneNightStar chapter 2 . 7/23/2018
Me parece que la forma en la que narras es muy fácil de entender, o por lo menos para mí lo es. Cuando en los demás fanfics los leo con ejemplos me termino revolviendo, en cambio de esta forma técnica puedo leer los detalles directo al grano

De hecho, me gusta mucho más la forma en la que narras que muchos otros fics que he leído los cuales son bastantes... Jeje... Te felicito por ello
Arisu003 chapter 5 . 6/14/2018
It’d be quite interesting if you decided to go completely AU with your story. While canon is obviously unique, we already know how it goes. It’s little changes like these (Hinata’s behavior, for example) that make readers stick around! I was wondering if you would stick to the canon pairing of NaruHina though? I love the idea of it, specially with this new confident version of Hinata we’ve gotten to know in the last few chapters.

The insight the reader gets on how the Hyūga Clan works really changes how you see things. You’ve clearly given it a lot of thought— which is admirable! I’m guessing that in a few years, Hinata will be the prodigy of the clan, rather than Neji. This will probably make him more bitter towards the main branch, but you know what? That’d make whatever relationship those two develop in the future more entertaining.

Also, I love long chapters in stories of this sort! Thank you for taking the time to write and plan everything out! Can’t wait for the next update! :)
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