LOVed this I took felt she was selfish at times and overly willful to the point of stupidity. However what I think we all forget is that she was a 17 year old girl thrust into a world that required grown up thinking something she simply wasn’t equip to do even after being the so called adult between her and her mom.

I cannot remember if I have already reviewed but I have read your story again and I still enjoy it.
I like this version of the story much more than the book, I like the way you explained the mating bond and just how real you made it.
The books, or the way Bella was written, made me doubt her and Edward's supposed connection, which made the whole series pointless to do if the doubt was there.
So thank you for this story. This, I can back up, the Twilight series... not so much.

This was fabulous. A great Bella start to grow up. I honestly always wonder how she did not remember them when she moved back but he was so important that she held him above her mate.

Loved it. Thanks for giving your Bella some feelings for the one person she was suppose to care about the most. In SM's story she seemed to care about everyone but him.

LOVVVVEEEDDDD ITTTT!

I really enjoyed this story. Well written.

Just awesome

Wow, this one shot is very well written. It shows a much stronger Bella who does not shy away from facing conflicts. SM should've done it like this.

i think i have already reviewed, but if not, loved it.

I really really love this. I kinda want to see one where Jasper finally confronts Bella about what the heck is wrong with her ;) But this was fantastic!

This was wonderful and brilliant. I have always wished that Bella was more smart and strong in canon. I loved how you portrayed her character. It was much better than the origional. It was beautifully written.

This was really amazing! I loved!

Wonderful story. Can't believe it's taken me so long to find. What a hidden gem. Thank you for not killing all the Cullens and for making it a dream. Love it.

freaking awesome!

You know, I think I prefer this to what happened in the actual series. I quite liked Jake at first then he became one of the most annoying jerks i'd ever read about, and I read a lot. While reading this story it occured to me that Jake is doing to Edward what Leah does to Sam, and for a moment i thought Bella would bring it up at the meeting, but maybe it would've caused more trouble. I do feel that Sam will realise it on his own once he has time to think about what Edward said about mates. Perhaps Jake will understand once he calms down, now Leah's a wolf he'll get both sides of the situation. Oh, and i really like jJasper in this, sounds odd considering he went on a killing spree, but what he said made so much sense and making plans like he did sounds like something he would do. Bella didn't actually tell Edward about her dream here, so I'm imagining her doing it one day at the Cullen house when she thinks the two of them are alone only for one of the others to overhear, or maybe Alice will see it and then the whole family can talk about it and Jasper will admit to having made such plans in reality and won't apologise for it. I think it might bring he and Bella closer in a strange way, I mean they don't seem to have much interaction in the series. Anyway, I've waffled enough, thanks for writing this, it was like reading part of the book before SM decided to give her least likable character aside from Jane a break.