oops i mistook the another story that was not written by you anyway loved both of your stories

nice story didnt like the prequel though(i hope you dont mind) but truly this is one of the best advanceshipping fics liked the reunions of ash and may

Why does everyone chose Reshoram?!
I personally like Zekrom way better, but idc. For the story it was really good, a bit shorter than its prequel but what the heck.
I was kinda awestruck on how you added Advanceshipping even when May wasn't there.
Some grammar mistakes, not too much and I wish the battles were a bit longer, but hey I asked for a touching romance/drama story and I got one.
I still can't belive everyone is getting pregnant in their 20s before their marriage...like jeez kids slow down!
Another great story, but I feel like it's hidden or something cuz I never expected a sequal, maybe put a notice on Mysterious Stranger cuz it's a bit more popular reviews wise.
Well...Catch ya Later
TBC

The ending is kind of contestshippy. I kinda don't get the story. Are May and Drew married or May and Ash? I know you said this is AaMayl but this is just weird.
This is not a flame.

Wait in chapter 6 jus wondering during iris nd ash's battle, the order for iris was fraxure, excadrill, then druddigon. By the time druddigon fainted, jus feraligator and garchomp fainted for ash, so how cud they both only hav 1 pokemon left? Typo?

Another wonderful story Midnight! (claps) seems like you always have a way to make a reader keep reading. Please make more and can you make another sequel to "May angel" cause you can make me read for an eternity! (I think)

(Awesomely disappears through thin air, but sees hiding behind a box. And waves good bye.) -Ketchummaple

Amazing. Loved this story. Great job! (:

Wow I like this story I finally got to read this fully and stuff and liked it man when you make anymore advanceshipping stories pm me so I can read more

Few stories have the capability to make me like drew and honestly this is one of them. Only cause of how he treats ashlyn as his own. I respect him in this story for that and you're the only advanceshipper to with a good heart. As of the ending. I liked it and it was sweet. A daughters pov is different from other stories. Sadly this is done but at least it leaves room for other stories .*cough. Ringer.*cough

Awww. This was a great way to end the story :)

Great chapter! :D

And there's the conclusion. Definitely a nice way of doing it but sad to say I feel as though it was rushed while you were making this. First of all I'm not sure why half of it was in italics and the amount of mistakes you made were more than your usual at this point. While the his/he's problem is there as well as a their/they're/their usage, both of which I have nothing bad to say except to mention them, I also noticed simple things like "I was determine not to" and "I don't we should give up just like that". So while I am happy that you decided to create one more chapter to bring everything to a close, I think you could have put a little more effort into it to even iron out things like that.

But that aside it was a happy ending over all. Ash riding on Reshiram was a good way to bring him back with a bit of style. Though I'm not exactly sure why Drew was there, it's not like he was enough of an antagonist in this half of the fic to worry about.

I hope you don't take what I said the wrong way but I just wanted to get a bit of constructive criticism and what I truthfully thought. All in all though the fic as a whole was a good addition to the series. It seemed rushed at the end, probably because as you said you were running out of ideas, but it still worked. Great work overall.

Aww! What a happy ending. I have to say, for a moment I thought Ash was truly dead, but I'm pretty sure if he could survive 13 movies and over 600 episodes at 10 years old, he could survive a falling building at 18. LOL I really liked this story and the prequel. I'd like to see how Ashlyn does in the first few days of her journey, but it's ultimately your decision if you want to continue the saga however you want. Can't wait to read more of your work.

YAY! He didn't die! I always love a happy ending! I was wondering when you were going to get back to this/finish it. Then again, who am I to talk since lately it's been taking me forever to finish just one chapter? Keep up the good work! Great story!

Aww. That was really sweet. I loved this story, too bad it's over though. I can't wait to see what other stories you have pllaned though.

WHAT A CLIFFHANGERRRRR! D:

you just ended it like thatt D:

I MUST KNOW.

Update soon :D

& Good job :D