Beautiful yet heart breaking story; it takes an rather different approach to the other stories based on Angest (not sure if I spelled that right, probably didn't.) and characters keeps their attitude and style, which turns it lifelike.

That was so ad and yet so unbelievably sweet! I mean, Hitsugaya here is obviously acting a bit stupid when he abandons her a second time just because he thinks it won't work out but on the other hand, isn't he just a bit justified? All the same, it was a grat fic, I loved it!

Think about it. There's a ton of baggage involved in any relationship between them. Without completely warping their characters (hello, pet peeve), bittersweet endings are highly likely. I wouldn't say downer ending, because it's not like they've lost everything. Just one relationship gone sour.

You were right in making them act this way in your story I can't see either of them crying their eyes out even if it's something like this. I thought you did a fantastic job protraying how they would feel if something like this actually would have happened in Bleach. Both of them were completely in their respective character in this story. Wonderful job! d(_o)

Oh and one more thing Toshiro my man how could you let soul society control your love life man. Your priorities are all wrong Karin should always come first no matter what! You had your chance and you let it slip away.

Awesome job my favorite author for this couple!

I can't believe that Toshiro didn't fight for her while he still could... :(

I like the concept - Karin is not the one who cries at Toshiro and Momo's wedding.

Tsk tsk tsk You missed your chance Hitsugaya

Nice story xP

This was sad... but very well written! :) keep it up Chica!

Soooo SAD!

Aw! Good job, i could picture all that actually happening, and i must agree, i don't think Karin is i the type to be completely heartbroken either:)

Awwww... That was very sad... I was hoping they would still be in the end.. But still, nice ending! xD

This is so sad!

I felt the pain and every emotion both karin and toshiro went through! Not to mention it almost made me cry! Dx

And yes! karin is a strong girl! and im sry but too bad toshiro!

you had your chance but you threw it away.

though at the end i actually thought that the wedding was going to be called off for a happy ending but alas it did not happen. not everything can be happy.

It was really well down great job!

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Damn...that made me so sad that I just wanna runto Shirou & hug him. Wow...that's...just...so sad...nice story though.

~sayo-chan

:( I felt toushiros pain. I felt his regret. And I was in d verge of crying too. Anyways great one shot. The feelings were portrYed really well.

I agree Karin is a strong confident girl!