Reviews for A Small Piece of Potter
SlytherinMonster120 chapter 4 . 11/17/2019
Luna. Teach me your ways.
Guest chapter 24 . 8/27/2017
great story, I'm not a fan of Dumbledore either.
why not put harry/Adrian in Hogwarts until tom can be revived then move the family to another magic school
serpiente marina chapter 24 . 8/15/2016
x favor continua me encanto lo que he leĆ­do hasta ahora
Winter chapter 24 . 12/27/2015
I LOVE IT!
HarryPotterSlashFreakyFan chapter 24 . 10/22/2015
Helooo. So I came across this story and immiadetly fell in love with it. Esspesially the fluffy goodness between father and son. Please update.
Passing Note chapter 24 . 9/3/2015
What i Think...Hm?
Update You Stupid Little Arsehole We Need More It's been two years! Hell I just Read it Now But You Need To Update Right Here Right Now

Damn You! Update, We Need Moooooaaaaaaar!
jessicariddle87 chapter 24 . 8/21/2015
OMG please keep up the great work! I'd love to read more of this story * big sad snakey eyes*
Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2015
Please update soon.
Guest chapter 24 . 4/11/2015
Please update soon.
Well Rounded Fandoms chapter 24 . 3/17/2015
Wait...who will Harry end up with? If you already know who, that's awesome but it leaves me with curiosity.
Hello Insert Name Here chapter 24 . 12/6/2014
Please, please, please update!
nightpurr chapter 24 . 10/13/2014
this is one of the most unique stories I have read on this sight.
I at first really like it & also I thought I knew where it was going. I am not sure if where I think you are going now is a good idea.
I mean if I have absorb the meaning so far as to where you are going next.
Do you intend on Snape & his son to go to school as father & son? NP, with that but if headmaster has got the best of them twice already will he not try to kill Snape & trap Harry again or just kill them both if they are in the open?
I also have one other problem of Harry appearance like part snake under clothes as will as his hands appearing different. Won't people be afraid of him to the point of wanting to kill him? I mean 2/3 of the school already thinks of snakes as evil.
Wouldn't it be best that after a short while his appearance is a normal boy like, unless he calls upon special powers.
They already got so much against them there is a very high chance of them being killed before even becoming a whole family.
Plus so far the only ones that know the whole story at this point is headmaster, the Snape's & the dead Potters.
Why would Harry even need to go to school in a matter of minutes he learns everything in a book. Wouldn't it be best that the Snape's or at less Harry remains hidden until his father is to be able to come back with papa & son's help?
I wish you luck, this has possibles but it's going to be hard, detailed & probably long.
Forgive my wording, but a writer I don't claim to be.I am looking forward to how your going to make this story flow.
Also I feel like you ready Harry's change & explaining everything. The emotions were there but it felt like part was missing. Sorry if I am being a bit picky in parts but you started with a great story & plot. Something really different. I hope you finish this. Maybe after finish and more experience you can go back and treat us with a rewrite.I have read many redone stories and was pleased I did.
Nightpurr
PS don't give up on yourself. Great imagination!
Waiting to see were you are going to take this.
Flying Chrissy chapter 24 . 6/20/2014
Great story! Look forward to the next update.
ani chapter 22 . 5/16/2014
Azerbaijen is not in Africa, it was once part of the USSR.
Gravity's Child chapter 23 . 2/4/2014
Aww. *coos happily* I can't wait for all of that damn Goat's ideas to fall apart. To read him watching his stupid ideas as they crumble into pieces in front of his face. It will be... wonderful. *purrs*
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